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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Post by oneman1973 » Fri May 27, 2011 5:56 am

Opps typo... It was ment to be ate... Thanks for the welcome!

Morsels by P. R. Grenier
Looking at the pile of tasty bits she licked her lips then ate them with the rest of the body parts.

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Post by oneman1973 » Fri May 27, 2011 6:37 am

This is kinda fun... Morsles was better but heres another...

The Bar - P. R. Grenier
Music played softly as john approached the bar, After pausing only a moment he leaned back and limboed

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Post by strawman » Fri May 27, 2011 3:37 pm

Alternating now or then tense
really mystifies your sentence.
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Post by tbaker2500 » Fri May 27, 2011 5:23 pm

strawman wrote:Alternating now or then tense
really mystifies your sentence.
Oh... I see what you did there! A rhyme!
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Post by tbaker2500 » Fri May 27, 2011 5:24 pm

oneman1973 wrote:This is kinda fun... Morsles was better but heres another...

The Bar - P. R. Grenier
Music played softly as john approached the bar, After pausing only a moment he leaned back and limboed
Caught me by surprise- I like it.
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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri May 27, 2011 10:18 pm

tbaker2500 wrote:
oneman1973 wrote: The Bar - P. R. Grenier
Music played softly as john approached the bar, After pausing only a moment he leaned back and limboed
Caught me by surprise- I like it.
You do realize that besides the spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors, it is not (gasp) twabble length!?

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Post by ROU Killing Time » Sat May 28, 2011 7:30 pm

oneman1973 wrote:Morsels by P. R. Grenier

Looking at the pile of tasty bits she licked her lips then eat them with the rest of the body parts.
I'd change "eat" to "ate."

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Hunger

Post by Farseeker » Sun May 29, 2011 1:44 am

I hunger, so I must eat. Then I will die.

Then you will hunger, and will eat, and will die.

But the Hunger, the Hunger lives.
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Post by jay4 » Tue May 31, 2011 4:30 am

All credits for this are due to Strawman. He originally posted this here: http://drabblecast.freeforums.org/drabb ... -t392.html. I just made enough mods to sneak it past the character-counting nazis.
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Post by HenryGaudet » Tue May 31, 2011 12:04 pm

How do we feel about fan twitfic?

Police today apologized for arresting the Flash due to a typo. An FBI bulletin had warned of an imminent Allen invasion.

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Post by @JDerrisWard » Tue May 31, 2011 3:24 pm

Plus Four to Murder

His glares as he aims, and the game is real. "Roll for initiative," he says, cocking the trigger and hogging the Funyuns.

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Post by nevermore_66 » Tue May 31, 2011 3:58 pm

I haunt health gurus, write in blood on their walls: "Death is inevitable - I quit cigarettes - And choked on a vegetable"
Boy meets girl.
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Post by ROU Killing Time » Tue May 31, 2011 4:33 pm

HenryGaudet wrote:How do we feel about fan twitfic?

Police today apologized for arresting the Flash due to a typo. An FBI bulletin had warned of an imminent Allen invasion.
I see what you did there. :)
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Post by AnnMaRou » Tue May 31, 2011 11:44 pm

first attempt at twabble inspired by british comedy series 'allo! allo!'

"Good moaning Rene, I have a massage for you."
Rene raised his eyes and hands up to heavens. "What message is it?"
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Post by tbaker2500 » Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:06 am

Oi, it's been years since I've seen 'allo! Good memories.

Nice fresh round of twitfics folks!
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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:16 am

I loudly proclaimed the end of the world: Monday next, at noon.
Judge Roy Bean, not amused, scheduled my death for 12:30.

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Post by ROU Killing Time » Wed Jun 01, 2011 3:23 pm

Algernon Sydney is Dead wrote:I loudly proclaimed the end of the world: Monday next, at noon.
Judge Roy Bean, not amused, scheduled my death for 12:30.
That'll larn ya.
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Post by ArnieGardner » Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:19 am

"Excalibur"

A boy pulled Excalibur from a stone, and was promptly arrested for destruction of public property, the little hoodlum!

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Post by nevermore_66 » Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:24 am

The sword was impounded. T'is written: he who removes the sword from the evidence locker...shall receive stiff fines.

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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Thu Jun 02, 2011 3:39 am

ArnieGardner wrote:A boy pulled Excalibur from a stone, and was promptly arrested for destruction of public property, the little hoodlum!
:)

The arresting officers "found" Henbane near where Arthur slept. So, when the Saxon hoards ravaged, Arthur was in Juvy.

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