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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:31 pm

Nymic wrote:Twabble twabble little people...
Welcome aboard, Nymic.

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Post by LizPennies » Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:41 am

They sat about, sipping mercury from china cups. It was a dreadfully boring tea party indeed. They weren't mad. Not yet.
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Post by Apocraphilia » Wed Mar 07, 2012 3:58 am

Nice work, Liz. :)

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Post by Nymic » Wed Mar 07, 2012 7:37 am

She looked down. Red stains bloomed across her chest. "Nice shot," she said.
Grinning, he squeezed his juice box again.

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Post by Christi » Wed Mar 07, 2012 10:12 am

The elf was vexed! She calmed her heart rate and scowled at her blooming attacker. She really despised Boogainvilleas.

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Post by strawman » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:21 am

Nymic wrote:She looked down. Red stains bloomed across her chest. "Nice shot," she said.
Grinning, he squeezed his juice box again.

Thanks for the welcome Algernon!
A worthy twabble.
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Post by tbaker2500 » Wed Mar 07, 2012 4:34 pm

Nymic wrote:She looked down. Red stains bloomed across her chest. "Nice shot," she said.
Grinning, he squeezed his juice box again.

Thanks for the welcome Algernon!
Heh. Nice one!
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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Wed Mar 07, 2012 10:48 pm

tbaker2500 wrote:
Nymic wrote:She looked down. Red stains bloomed across her chest. "Nice shot," she said.
Grinning, he squeezed his juice box again.

Thanks for the welcome Algernon!
Heh. Nice one!
Yes it is. Am I the only one that thought "juice box" was slang for... Uh, never mind. :oops: :)

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Post by mrgoldenbrown » Thu Mar 08, 2012 6:29 am

The pills help, somewhat. But not even post singularity nanobot infused gel caps made by aliens can fix my broken heart.

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Post by loyaleagle » Thu Mar 08, 2012 6:58 am

mrgoldenbrown wrote:The pills help, somewhat. But not even post singularity nanobot infused gel caps made by aliens can fix my broken heart.
I liked this one but tripped over the phrase "post singularity nanobot infused gel caps." Enjoyed the finish!
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Post by mrgoldenbrown » Thu Mar 08, 2012 7:15 am

loyaleagle wrote:
mrgoldenbrown wrote:The pills help, somewhat. But not even post-singularity, nanobot infused gelcaps made by aliens can fix my broken heart.
I liked this one but tripped over the phrase "post singularity nanobot infused gel caps." Enjoyed the finish!
Good point. I would have loved to squeeze a comma in there. I was originally stuck on the idea of post singularity tech, but maybe that isn't crucial. How about this:

The pills help, a little. But not even nanobot infused gelcaps made by hypersmart alien robots can mend my broken heart.

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Post by Christi » Thu Mar 08, 2012 8:09 am

Algernon Sydney is Dead wrote:
tbaker2500 wrote:
Nymic wrote:She looked down. Red stains bloomed across her chest. "Nice shot," she said.
Grinning, he squeezed his juice box again.

Thanks for the welcome Algernon!
Heh. Nice one!
Yes it is. Am I the only one that thought "juice box" was slang for... Uh, never mind. :oops: :)

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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:52 am

Christi wrote:Dear ASID, I love the convoluted complexities of your dark mysterious mind.
Thank you! I shall be quick and merciful.

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Post by strawman » Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:06 pm

He says that to all the girls.
But I believe this time he reversed the sentence order.
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Post by Nymic » Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:35 pm

Billy of the Hills,
We apologize for your recent abduction and any loss of friends it may bring about.
-Your Alien Nation


(not sure if I need to point this out but the first couple readers, before i posted, didn't get it.. Was playing with the concept of alienation.. Alien nation.. Heh.) :shock:
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Post by Christi » Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:27 pm

strawman wrote:He says that to all the girls.
But I believe this time he reversed the sentence order.
Happy to be one of the girls!
Do you mean his usually merc and quickfull?? :?

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Post by Christi » Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:29 pm

Nymic wrote:Billy of the Hills,
We apologize for your recent abduction and any loss of friends it may bring about.
-Your Alien Nation


(not sure if I need to point this out but the first couple readers, before i posted, didn't get it.. Was playing with the concept of alienation.. Alien nation.. Heh.) :shock:
Nice (no explanation required here)

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Post by Christi » Thu Mar 08, 2012 3:40 pm

Cruncher the ogre, he crunched and then groaned.
“I give up !” he screamed
“Damn! These numbers are too tough” he moaned.

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Post by strawman » Thu Mar 08, 2012 6:40 pm

Christi wrote:
strawman wrote:He says that to all the girls.
But I believe this time he reversed the sentence order.
Happy to be one of the girls!
Do you mean his usually merc and quickfull?? :?
I was trying to euphemize, "W.B.ty, Mme", but may have euthanized it instead.
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