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Cwpants · Post by **Cwpants** » Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:58 pm

Moving in. 10 flights of stairs.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.

Edit: Fixed confusion in line 2.

strawman · Post by **strawman** » Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:33 pm

Likee.
Climbing the stairs does make you want to cut out the pronouns. But second line misled my brain a tad. Sounded like you were making the offer.

Varda · Post by **Varda** » Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:33 pm

Cwpants wrote:Moving in. 9 flights of stairs.
Offer to lend a hand.
I wish I'd gotten his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.

Aw, man, he gave you the hand without the digits? Talk about rude!

Cwpants · Post by **Cwpants** » Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:45 pm

Varda wrote:
Cwpants wrote:Moving in. 9 flights of stairs.
Offer to lend a hand.
I wish I'd gotten his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.
Aw, man, he gave you the hand without the digits? Talk about rude!

I know it was an unnecessary pun...but I couldn't help myself!!! Plus, I thought Varda would get a chuckle.

Cymraeg · Post by **Cymraeg** » Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:35 pm

A bonfire on Samhain night,
the Morrigan will dance and fight.
So watch your wee ones or they might
Become the sacrifice.

strawman · Post by **strawman** » Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:48 pm

Wow, been a while since I saw an AAAB rhyme scheme in a rocking... wait a minute!, this is the second really good poem posted here in 24 hours. Sunner's drabble and Cymraeg's twabble... what?

-You want to combine 'poem' and 'twabble' and 'drabble'? But, the permutations!
-Yes, definitely... autographed photos of the Chalice of Glory...
-Ask them what? ...If they're available for a B-Sides interview ?

Varda · Post by **Varda** » Mon Oct 21, 2013 8:02 pm

Mountains of dishes. Apply soap. Scrub.

It's not working!

A bubble pops. In the watery mire, the primordial scum stirs.

MonsieurMoustache · Post by **MonsieurMoustache** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 4:36 pm

Cwpants wrote:Moving in. 10 flights of stairs.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.

Edit: Fixed confusion in line 2.

Excellent twitt. Like the poem form too.

strawman · Post by **strawman** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:10 pm

Varda wrote:Mountains of dishes. Apply soap. Scrub.

It's not working!

A bubble pops. In the watery mire, the primordial scum stirs.

Kinda like a little Dr. Zeus Greek mythology creation story: The gods had a helluva party. Next day, down in the grease trap...

strawman · Post by **strawman** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:12 pm

MonsieurMoustache wrote:
Cwpants wrote:Moving in. 10 flights of stairs.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.

Is a hand without digits an analog hand?
*facepalm*

MonsieurMoustache · Post by **MonsieurMoustache** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:50 pm

The cereal box said there was a surprise inside. I prodded the many-legged thing and couldn't claim false advertising.

MonsieurMoustache · Post by **MonsieurMoustache** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:53 pm

Gary brushes religiously
But has bad cavities
He sleeps with his mouth open all night
To tooth fairy's hungry delight.

tbaker2500 · Post by **tbaker2500** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:58 pm

MonsieurMoustache wrote:The cereal box said there was a surprise inside. I prodded the many-legged thing and couldn't claim false advertising.

Nice

KazzaB · Post by **KazzaB** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 10:01 pm

He sees it in the distance. Red and silver flash, dust surges upward. He lifts his foot. Too late, now he’s only road kill.

Algernon Sydney is Dead · Post by **Algernon Sydney is Dead** » Tue Oct 22, 2013 11:11 pm

In other words, he's squick and tired...

Welcome aboard, KazzaB!

Cwpants · Post by **Cwpants** » Wed Oct 23, 2013 2:45 am

MonsieurMoustache wrote:
Cwpants wrote:Moving in. 10 flights of stairs.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.

Edit: Fixed confusion in line 2.

Excellent twitt. Like the poem form too.

Thanks!!!

strawman wrote:Is a hand without digits an analog hand?
*facepalm*

Oi Vey! LOL

Algernon Sydney is Dead · Post by **Algernon Sydney is Dead** » Fri Oct 25, 2013 3:52 am

Not sure which of these is scaring the kids more this season...

I wear his legs for my pants.
They're really rather itchy.
Now the bastard's dogged by ants
it makes him mean and twitchy.

Beware hollow weenies, so scary
when wearing costumes teenie or hairy.
Unless you think it's neat
to get a creamy treat.

Spindaddy · Post by **Spindaddy** » Fri Oct 25, 2013 4:39 am

"So that was why they called those flowers Mums," he mused. "Siri, where should I bury Dad?" "Under the Poppies" it said.

Algernon Sydney is Dead · Post by **Algernon Sydney is Dead** » Fri Oct 25, 2013 4:51 am

Spindaddy wrote:"So that was why they called those flowers Mums," he mused. "Siri, where should I bury Dad?" "Under the Poppies" it said.

Been having too many punflower seeds?

Bejami · Post by **Bejami** » Fri Oct 25, 2013 7:31 am

About to incinerate his most recent experiment like all the others, he heard a mewing. They had worked. What had he done?

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