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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Post by Grrlwriter » Mon Oct 15, 2012 11:28 pm

With all these great posts I've been inspired to write more - thanks, everyone!

The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.

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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:01 am

Grrlwriter wrote:The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
But the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.

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Post by Grrlwriter » Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:09 am

But the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.
I tip my hat to you :) Bravo!
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Post by Grrlwriter » Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:32 am

I'm blaming hanging out on this forum for the obscene amount of twitfic I'm writing. Obscene, I tell you! Shield your eyes!

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I go all out. I wear a mask and devil's horns. I drip fake blood over my clothes.
Tonight, no one can tell that I'm a monster.


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Post by moman13 » Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:15 pm

Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.

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Post by Grrlwriter » Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:32 pm

moman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
Oooh, ooh, ooh, I want one! :)

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Post by loyaleagle » Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:32 pm

moman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
Clever :) Welcome aboard!
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Post by JMiriah » Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:18 am

Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.

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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:45 pm

JMiriah wrote:Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.
Very nice! :D
Maybe should be: , Pumpkin. (comma before Pumpkin) though?

Anyway, it's got it all: Squick, multiple entendres, a fresh (at least I hope it's fresh) perspective.

Welcome aboard, JMiriah!
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Post by JMiriah » Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:52 pm

Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.

Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!

Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:

Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.

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Post by Grrlwriter » Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:10 pm

JMiriah wrote:Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.

Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!

Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:

Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
Yays, welcome to the forum! Love the zombie pumpkin pie - it certainly would save on all the baking I need to do this fall :)

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Post by Etaan » Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:51 pm

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Post by ROU Killing Time » Sat Oct 20, 2012 6:13 am

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Post by Grrlwriter » Sat Oct 20, 2012 6:46 am

Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?

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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Post by strawman » Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:12 pm

Grrlwriter wrote:Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
I've got issues
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?
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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Post by Grrlwriter » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:52 am

strawman wrote: I've got issues
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?
Thanks to you I've had that song stuck in my head all day! :P

I've got nightmares
In dark pastures
I've got a chainsaw
Who could ask for anything more?

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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:46 am

The heroine of the story, was a caretaker at a cemetery. The character was not well received but she kept the plot intact.

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Post by strawman » Mon Oct 22, 2012 12:01 pm

Punctuation nazi took the day off.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:56 am

I can be a lad no more, even though I wear your youthful skin. The pain is deep & my master calls. Perhaps another offering.

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