Spinning Faster and Faster
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Spinning Faster and Faster
I couldn’t park in the garage, Jimmy said. I was annoyed. I worry about people breaking my mirrors or peeing in my wheel wells or something.
What gives, man? I asked.
No room, he told me. Moon’s in there.
I peeked in the garage, and there it was: the moon, spinning quietly.
It’s wobbling, I said.
Yeah, Jimmy nodded. That’s why I pulled it in. Gonna fix the alignment, maybe some new shocks.
Easy fix, I said. You don’t need a garage for that.
Yeah, said Jimmy, grinning. But this weekend I’m going to soup it up. Baby’s gonna cook.
What gives, man? I asked.
No room, he told me. Moon’s in there.
I peeked in the garage, and there it was: the moon, spinning quietly.
It’s wobbling, I said.
Yeah, Jimmy nodded. That’s why I pulled it in. Gonna fix the alignment, maybe some new shocks.
Easy fix, I said. You don’t need a garage for that.
Yeah, said Jimmy, grinning. But this weekend I’m going to soup it up. Baby’s gonna cook.
Re: Spinning Faster and Faster
Begs for genuine audio production, if Norm can find a straight voice with a heavy Brooklyn accent.
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Re: Spinning Faster and Faster
Surreally fun.
On a style note, is there a reason you didn't use quotation marks?
On a style note, is there a reason you didn't use quotation marks?
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Re: Spinning Faster and Faster
I was feeling lit-ficcy the day I wrote it. 

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Re: Spinning Faster and Faster
Read this on your blog. I really like these sorts of drabbles you do, they're full of so much imagery you can't properly imagine. I like that.
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