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Re: Secretnude's Drabble Poetry Corner

Post by ROU Killing Time » Wed Jan 22, 2014 4:41 pm

strawman wrote:ROU and I would like to ask if you've read Danielewski's House of Leaves.
Just interested in where this might be headed.
Hey, who let you in my head?

Oh, yeah... I forgot.
House of Leaves is a good, strange, and downright frightening read.
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A normal post singularity life (Valentines)

Post by secretnude » Wed Jan 22, 2014 4:45 pm

In this post singularity
you are not wealthy
but at least you are healthy.

With regularity
you do see pictures
of a certain model that you picture
in your mind
using the neonet
to get
certain carnal pleasures
that you treasure.

You know she will never
ever
hookup
with you so you give up
that dream
and simply dream
to scream
one day
and say:
'The lottery, I won!
Life is good. bar none!'

That day
never came
but you still kept playing that game.

You get a not so beautiful wife
and live
a normal post singularity life.

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Do you want to live forever and ever? (Valetines)

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:27 am

We never
ever
will go to a proper prom.

Proms
are gone as schools closed
as imposed
by the Brain Interface Device
that is nice.

We never
ever
failed a test
unlike the rest.

We were the best.

We have several post doctorate
degrees.

We learn at an accelerated
rate.

We have lots of time free,
so you see,
we went to a dance
for a chance
to have a faux prom
near the University.

We danced as the Singularity
brings us a chance to be forever young.

'Forever Young'
was the song playing
as we were dancing
and embracing.

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Re: Do you want to live forever and ever? (Valetines)

Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:33 am

secretnude wrote:
'Forever Young'
was the song playing
as we were dancing
and embracing.

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Followed up by this one:

We're the ship without a storm
The cold without the warm
Light inside the darkness
That it needs, yeah

We're a laugh without tear
The hope without the fear
We are coming, home

We're off to the witch
We may never, never, never, come home
But the magic that we'll feel
Is worth the lifetime

We're all born upon the cross
We're the throw before the toss
You can release yourself
But the only way is down

We don't come alone
We are fire, we are stone
We're the hand that writes
Then quickly moves away

We'll know for the first time
If we're evil or divine
We're the last in line, yeah
We're the last in line

Two eyes from the east
It's the angel or the beast
And the answer lies
Between the good and bad

We search for the truth
We could die upon the tooth
But the thrill of just the chase
Is worth the pain

We'll know for the first time
If we're evil or divine
We're the last in line, yeah
We're the last in line, oh

Yeah, we're off to the witch
We may never, never, never come home
But the magic that we'll feel
It worth a lifetime

We're all born upon the cross
You know we're the throw before the toss
You can release yourself
But the only way to go is down

We'll know for the first time
If we're evil or divine
We're the last in line, oh
We're the last in line
See how we'll shine

We're the last in
We're the last in
We're the last in
We're the last in
We're the last in
We're the last in line, oh

We're a ship without a storm
We're the cold inside the warm
We're the laugh without tear
We're the smile without the mirror

We're the last in line
We're the last in line
We're the last in line
See how we'll shine
We're the last in line
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One night in Bangkok made my marriage tumble (Valentines)

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:31 am

I am a top executive,
a member of the relatively
new immortal class.

I saw this beautiful lass
with class
in a Hotel in Bangkok
while to my AI secretary, I talk.

I used my neonet connected brain
to get her name
and gain
personal details.

I didn't fail
when I attempted
to tempt
her with some small talk.

We walked
towards her room
knowing
my marriage is doomed.

My wife will soon be wailing
at another instance
of my infidelities by chance.

This beautiful lass
with class,
I understand is just like me,
we are almost Gods, you see.

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Your Choices
a. Break up with your wife
and have a new life.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=5327&p=46290#p46290

b. Apologise and be nice.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=5327&p=46288#p46288
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Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Jan 23, 2014 6:43 am

I went with option b. (but there were extenuating circumstances.)

Strawman, I'm starting to worry that our secretnude really is Hyperion's Martin Silenus. (If you haven't read it, shame on you, it's a Hugo/Nebula winner...)
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Undying love (Valentines)

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 8:08 am

"I only had a one night stand,
please understand
with a beautiful lass
with class
in a Hotel in Bangkok.

Please talk,
I now promise to walk
the straight and narrow path
as defined by math
as a line
so our marriage will be fine",
you said to your wife
who kept the silent treatment
after a maltreatment.

Earlier today, she said:
"This marriage is dead!
DNA kit
I bought has got a hit
for an unknown female!
Another female?
Why"?
Your wife cried.

You confessed
then professed
you undying love
since you are both immortal
and infidelity is immoral.

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Immortal love turns to Immortal hate

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 9:23 am

"I really cannot promise to be good!

You aren't in a mood
to forgive
so this marriage gives.

I have a new girl now.

I somehow
met her
on a business trip.

I did flip
on her
beautiful form",
You did inform
your soon to be former wife
as she said:
"Our marriage
is dead?

Do think
that our link
is just a joke?

I will
make you broke!

I will
call my lawyer now!

You will
be wise to prepare somehow
for divorce
proceedings of course"!

Immortal
love was transmuted to immortal hate
between two immortals
at any rate.

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Re: Secretnude's Drabble Poetry Corner

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 9:50 am

I have not read the book
Hyperion too
and I guess you
can shame me too.

I will have to take a good look
for that good book
in our second hand stores.

I said before
that I am a cheapskate
since my body, employers hate.

If I am Martin Silenus
then DC is the AI Technocore
who you mentioned in a post before
bought a single copy
of his work of genius.

I have *no* copy
of my poetry
anywhere else, you see.

My poems are written
on the fly
on a smartphone where I write
on the sly.
ROU Killing Time wrote:In Dan Simmons' "Hyperion/The Fall of Hyperion" the poet, Martin Silenus, wrote his magnum opus, "The Cantos." An epic poem 1000's of pages long.

His publisher said it wouldn't sell, but in deference to his status as a best-selling author a small edition was published. The public categorically hated it, with the exception of the AI Techno-core, who considered it the ultimate piece of human literature.

Sadly, the Techno-core only purchased a single copy.
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More than meets the eye.. nanobots transform

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 10:44 am

You took
one good look
at your naked form
as you were informed
by the neoBody shop guy
why
it will take months to transform
your body form.

Nanobots
in the pills you bought
do painless work
of body
rework.

All it took was a full body
Ultra Hi Resolution
MRI scan
and canned
menus
to program the body
rework solution
for nanobots
you bought.

You first thought
you were scammed.

Nanobots
worked slow and sure
and you took nude pictures
just to be sure.

Three
months passed pain free.

Results
you can now see
that you definitely
cannot fault.

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In a Lunar mining company base, a disaster we face

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 1:38 pm

Our Lunar base
did face
a rouge burst of cosmic rays.

The Cosmic Rays
killed some of our crew.

Our surviving crew
had no clue
about what is to happened next.

The next
day,
many of us got sick.

E. coli in our gut quickly
mutated into superbugs.

The kind of bug
your body can't sweep under the rug.

We did have anti radiation pills
but that was no longer chill
against a mutant strain
as our medical resources did drain.

We had no choice but to backup our brains.

People on Earth and Mars
were fine, thank the stars.

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Re: Secretnude's Drabble Poetry Corner

Post by strawman » Thu Jan 23, 2014 2:53 pm

ROU Killing Time wrote: (If you haven't read it, shame on you, it's a Hugo/Nebula winner...)
If I am to be shamed for each Hugo/Nebula winner I have not read, then boy is my face red!

But http://hyperioncantos.wikia.com/wiki/Martin_Silenus should be ashamed, in that so far as I can tell, it never mentions Dan Simmons .
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Re: Secretnude's Drabble Poetry Corner

Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Jan 23, 2014 6:04 pm

strawman wrote:
ROU Killing Time wrote: (If you haven't read it, shame on you, it's a Hugo/Nebula winner...)
If I am to be shamed for each Hugo/Nebula winner I have not read, then boy is my face red!

But http://hyperioncantos.wikia.com/wiki/Martin_Silenus should be ashamed, in that so far as I can tell, it never mentions Dan Simmons .
Well, Simmons did craft him as the greatest of authors, so he was kinda hoist on his own petard there.
But the whole series is an interesting exposition on the nature and danger of false Gods and symbols, or true symbols perverted to evil ends.
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Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Jan 23, 2014 6:08 pm

(I should note that the Duet of Hyperion & The Fall of Hyperion was followed up a few years later with a companion duet, Endymion and The Rise of Endymion.)
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I could be on Earth now in a robotic body somehow

Post by secretnude » Thu Jan 23, 2014 8:24 pm

Our Lunar base
is under strict quarantine. We face
a superbug
resistant to all drugs.

Many of our surviving crew
is now in medical stasis.

Robotic AI doctor flew
in to resolve the crisis.

AI Doctor not fond
of house calls
from across the pond
we call AIHouse
after the show,
you know.

He lacks bedside manners.

What matters
now is we secure
a cure
for our survival to be ensured.

We were insured
for brain restoration in Android bodies
if our biological bodies
fail. We could be on Earth now
with technological bodies
somehow
superior to our biological bodies.

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Your Choices:

a. You bit
the Lunar Regolith.

b. You are in Medical Stasis
to wake in the future after the crisis.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=5327&start=540#p46334

c. I wanna go home
to Rome
now
in a Robotic body somehow.
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=5327&p=46317#p46317

(Dreaming
of Electric Sheep
while Sleeping

Philip K. Dick
is slick!)
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Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Jan 23, 2014 10:30 pm

Definitely C.

I took his class in reality rearrangement.
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Will I dream of electric sheep while asleep?

Post by secretnude » Fri Jan 24, 2014 12:58 am

I was given palliative care.

I dared
to exchange my decaying flesh
on the Moon
really soon
for a fresh
Google Honda NexusAndroid Body.

A body
that nobody
would ever think
stinks.

My brain
was drained
of all my thoughts

My thoughts
were brought
via neonet
laser link
to an Earth based neoBody
shop, I think.

Gordon Gekko Insurance
paid for my only chance
to be among the immortal 1%
in a decent
male
technological
form.

I signed the e-mail
waiver form.

I was told, I will not be able to reproduce
but a great orgasm, I can easily produce.

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Glad to have an Android Dad

Post by secretnude » Fri Jan 24, 2014 2:03 am

I left my decaying flesh
on the Moon for a fresh
NexusAndroid Body
on an Earth based neoBody
shop and felt like several millions.

Several millions
was probably the cost
that Gordon Gekko Insurance lost
due to my accidental death on the moon
so soon.

I am now an immortal 1%
in a decent
male technological form.

I was informed
that my family
was waiting outside.

I told them from family
I have nothing to hide
so my family
came in
with a huge grin
to hug their naked dad in
a body they did not recognise
with their eyes.
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I am fully functional and I know multiple techiques

Post by secretnude » Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:04 am

Your wife admired
your new Android body
and desired
to get intimate
using her real body
on your imitation
one.

One
night after the kids were asleep
you and your wife
had sex real deep.

Your wife
told you that
your body is for keep
as she moaned
and groaned
on a Robotic
D**k
that
is slick.

No need for birth control,
her desire for you went out of control.

Your Android Body
is like Adonis on steroids, a body
to desire
and admire.

You are an immortal
desired
by mere mortals
a God on Earth
with desires
on Earth.
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Re: Secretnude's Drabble Poetry Corner

Post by secretnude » Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:43 am

I am pushing the envelope
a bit with a male
android eloping
a human female.

I have to acknowledge
that I have knowledge
of a certain beloved TV show
Episode
to which this idea is owed
in which Data and Tasha Yar
did star
but the sex scene
was clean.

Star Trek TNG The Naked Now
was the show
I did know.

I hope, I have not exceeded
some community norms.
and if I have exceeded
some norms,
just inform
and I promise to reform.

I have more from my twisted mind
that on this page you will soon find.
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