Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

[Macha]

When flesh was cut away from fabric, would she think the pain was worth it? She smirked. Of course. She would be level ten!

[Klaymen]

Having slain the Nemean Lion, the Lernaean Hydra and the Stymphalian Birds, Hercules has been detained by Greenpeace.

[Antipodes]

Sis, go look outside. It's 2 A.M. and the sun's coming up! Hurry up, it's fading! Did you see it Sis? Sis? Damn cellphones!

[Antipodes]

I am fairly new listener and a brand new poster - this is only my second post.
I'm just wondering what criticisms all you twabble-gurus may have for me, and which one of these variants you may prefer, and why:

"Usurper"
Night skulks on the far side of the world, out of Sun's sight. Sun must never see her. She plots to emerge, to take revenge.

"Usurpers"
The nights hide on the far sides of the worlds where Sun can never see them. They plot to emerge, to overthrow her tyranny.

[Antipodes]

She was beautiful in blue, wrapped in wispy white. Mars inched closer. Then he noticed the little drab child. Forget it!

(btw: Am I the only one here? Hello... Hello!)

[Algernon Sydney is Dead]

(btw: Am I the only one here? Hello... Hello!)

Pretty much; sorry.

I drop by OIABM to sweep spam under the rug...

[Algernon Sydney is Dead]

... which one of these variants you may prefer, and why:

"Usurper"
Night skulks on the far side of the world, out of Sun's sight. Sun must never see her. She plots to emerge, to take revenge.
...

I prefer that first version. It's clearer and the voice more "active".

Possible variant:
Sun must never see her, so Night hides her dark heart on the far side of the world. She'll have revenge one, uh.. day.
Crap.

[ArcaneKnight]

After I had removed all the soft skin from her lovely face, all she did was stare at me with those big blue unblinking eyes.

[ArcaneKnight]

I was surprised the police hadn't charged me with identity theft, for I was wearing my victim's face when they caught me.

[ArcaneKnight]

Can anyone tell if there is somewhere else to post twit-fic like this? not sure if this podcast will be returning and i am really getting into this kind of writing.

[ArcaneKnight]

Found it, Loved it. But I found out it's been dead all along and I've just been cradling a memory. Now a piece of me has died.

R.I.P. Drabblecast (Hoping I'm Wrong!)

[Algernon Sydney is Dead]

Can anyone tell if there is somewhere else to post twit-fic like this? not sure if this podcast will be returning and i am really getting into this kind of writing.

On your twitter account for one. Go ahead, start with that identity theft twabble.

[ArcaneKnight]

On your twitter account for one. Go ahead, start with that identity theft twabble.

Not sure if your being serious....

[ArcaneKnight]

I created a Twitter account to write my twit-fic on. Hopefully I can get some followers. it's here at:

https://twitter.com/ArcaneKnight372?s=09

[ArcaneKnight]

(btw: Am I the only one here? Hello... Hello!)

Now I feel like I am the only one here.

[ArcaneKnight]

7 did all he could to hold back his evil urge. He didn't know why he wanted to taste his companion's flesh but in the end 7 8 9.

[RustyTomatoes]

Three days ago there was no extra door in my home. Two days ago the extra door was shut. Yesterday I was alone and unafraid.

[RustyTomatoes]

The family next door is strange. They insist on burning their dead. It is simply awful! We prefer ours to be medium-rare.

[RustyTomatoes]

It was a dark and stormy night. It is still a dark and stormy night. The years pass and I cannot remember if the sun was real.

[dharmabum]

I stood in front of the last remaining mirror in the house. How silly I'd been. I looked up to see only one of us was smiling.