Allure

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Suomy Nona
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Allure

Post by Suomy Nona » Fri Dec 28, 2018 11:58 am

The bells of midnight began to ring.

Quickly she left the ballroom, the prince at her heals.

As she ran down the palace stairs, she saw that she had outpaced the prince and kicked off a glass slipper to guide him.

Before entering the woods, she kicked the other slipper off as a second marker to her trail, then moved into position behind a large oak tree.

As the fairy magic wore off, she watched the prince kneel over her first slipper and gaze out into the woods.

“Come on… Come on…” she muttered to herself

extending her waiting claws.

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Re: Allure

Post by Weird Beard » Fri Dec 28, 2018 6:24 pm

Awesome, I like it
I peek through the cracks from a world where Reality Fractured

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Re: Allure

Post by MementoHero » Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:02 am

Very nice. I felt the concept was delivered perfectly.
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Re: Allure

Post by Suomy Nona » Sat Dec 29, 2018 11:57 am

:D

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