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by unreliable narrator
Tue Nov 04, 2014 7:46 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Piddle and Whizz ran out into the street... their pace only slowed when the blazing sun dried them into pavement stains.
by unreliable narrator
Tue Nov 04, 2014 2:26 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Last Thoughts
Replies: 6
Views: 1824

Re: Last Thoughts

Burrrilliant! From attention grabbing first line to grin inducing last. Very well written. :lol:
by unreliable narrator
Tue Nov 04, 2014 2:19 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Dream of the Dragon
Replies: 4
Views: 2014

Re: Dream of the Dragon

I really like this! :D Nice and Lovecraftian without the purple prose. The atmosphere reminds me alot of a short story by Chad Fifer of the HPL Literary Podcast from ages ago, although his one is from the Dragon's perspective. Heres a link, I think you'd enjoy it. http://hppodcraft.com/2010/11/17/th...
by unreliable narrator
Sat Nov 01, 2014 8:37 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Just Another Shaggy Dog Story
Replies: 4
Views: 1736

Re: Just Another Shaggy Dog Story

Doh! Editing now. Thanks for the heads up! :?
by unreliable narrator
Sat Nov 01, 2014 8:32 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Gardening
Replies: 10
Views: 3476

Re: Gardening

Good twist! Keep em coming!!!
by unreliable narrator
Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:05 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Just Another Shaggy Dog Story
Replies: 4
Views: 1736

Just Another Shaggy Dog Story

There had been much excitement amongst the canine community in anticipation of the ‘Pooches Promenade’. They arrived in droves, genteelly unfastening their tails at the door and hanging them on endless rows of hooks around the foyer. There was dancing and merrymaking until the wee small hours when a...
by unreliable narrator
Wed Oct 29, 2014 8:19 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I want to die peacefully in my sleep, like my grandfather... not screaming hysterically like the passengers in his car.
by unreliable narrator
Sat Oct 25, 2014 2:47 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: A knock at the door
Replies: 12
Views: 3340

Re: A knock at the door

I really like the ambiguity of this one, it makes you think about the possible relationships between the characters. I took it that the narrator and Joanne were perhaps Terrance's daughters, that the police or social services were hammering on the door, and that it took so long to clean the floorboa...
by unreliable narrator
Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:34 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Diary of the World's End
Replies: 3
Views: 1547

Diary of the World's End

It was October when they first arrived. Great wings carried them over rooftops and into our city squares. They dragged us from our houses, herded us, corralled us then branded our flesh with metal symbols heated in the roaring pyres where once our churches stood. Few attempted escape, and those that...
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Algernon Sydney is Dead wrote:
unreliable narrator wrote:After the funeral I sit and cry.
My little boy appears, asking why I'm upset.
I look away and answer, "Because I miss you."
But as my boy jabs ghostly claws into my kidneys, he snarls, "But you didn't miss me with that cricket bat; did you Daddy?"
Burrilliant! :P
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:42 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

To celibrate my 100th post I thought I'd share an epitaph that I saw on a gravestone as a kid. It resonated with the teenage-me so much I have never forgotten it, so I've clumsily cobbled it into a Twabble... here goes. An Epitaph Remember as you pass me by As you are now so once was I, As I am now ...
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 4:40 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

After the funeral I sit and cry.
My little boy appears, asking why I'm upset.
I look away and answer, "Because I miss you."
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:33 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Samantha wiggled her nose and Darren was decapitated before an astounded studio audience.
Later the show got axed too.
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:15 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

... I land with a jolt. Shake my head clear. Run to the control desk. Must stop timeloop! Too late. Jump into the vortex...
by unreliable narrator
Sun Oct 19, 2014 1:48 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I awoke to a loud gurgling noise from the wardrobe.
Then came the roaring and an icy scream...
Narnia was flooding again.
by unreliable narrator
Fri Oct 17, 2014 7:26 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Idyllic Couple
Replies: 3
Views: 1279

Re: The Idyllic Couple

I too was wondering where it would go and was not disappointed. Excellent job! I really enjoyed this one. :lol:
by unreliable narrator
Fri Oct 17, 2014 7:19 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The desperate screams and the rattling of chains were becoming a nightly incident... I'd have to sedate grandma again.
by unreliable narrator
Fri Oct 17, 2014 6:50 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Algernon Sydney is Dead wrote:Yes, I might not be well-adjusted or sane by any measure of the words, but that just means I have more options to work with.
Nice! :D
by unreliable narrator
Thu Oct 16, 2014 2:11 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7568
Views: 891771

Re: Quandary

pondspider wrote:Finding his feet, he sat on the chair to put them on.
It was then he saw the problem. He'd left his hands in his other jacket.
Great! :D
by unreliable narrator
Thu Oct 16, 2014 12:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Trick of the Light (Halloween Theme)
Replies: 14
Views: 4797

Re: Trick of the Light (Halloween Theme)

Wow! I am both shocked and honoured at the same time! Great narration... not unreliable at all. :wink: The music is great too. Thank you tibbi :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: