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by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 30, 2014 1:45 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Windows of the Soul?
Replies: 8
Views: 2061

Re: Windows of the Soul?

I'll take Ghoulish! Thanks :lol:
by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 30, 2014 1:40 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Walk Home
Replies: 4
Views: 1036

Re: The Walk Home

Thanks for your comments guys. All practical criticism welcome. I'm new to Drabbling and hopefully learning as I go! :)
by unreliable narrator
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:50 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Broken Promise (Halloween)
Replies: 31
Views: 9558

Re: Broken Promise (Halloween)

Nice work. Very atmospheric!
by unreliable narrator
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:46 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Hinge rights

pondspider wrote:He lifted the latch and pushed the gate open, its hinges protesting noisily.
What do we want? Oil. When do we want it? Now!
Outstanding! I was laughing and groaning at the same time... not an easy task... maybe I need some oil?!?
by unreliable narrator
Mon Sep 29, 2014 2:40 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Walk Home
Replies: 4
Views: 1036

The Walk Home

Although it was late I decided to take a shortcut home through the park. It was poorly lit but seemed deserted so I had no qualms as I turned down the path and headed west. I had walked maybe a few hundred yards when I sensed something and stopped. To my right lay an open playing field, in the centr...
by unreliable narrator
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:54 pm
Forum: Drabblenews
Topic: Wolves in parks: not "news" but fascinating nonetheless
Replies: 5
Views: 1900

Re: Wolves in parks: not "news" but fascinating nonetheless

Thanks for the feedback. I don't know much about the subject but someone posted the link on Facebook so I thought I'd post it here. The counter arguement looks just as compelling and it seems a shame that politics is driving through changes rather than legitimate research. I met a bloke down the pub...
by unreliable narrator
Sun Sep 28, 2014 8:03 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I was masturbating to a copy of National Geographic today, and I'm not sure who was more embarrassed... me or my dentist.
by unreliable narrator
Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:44 pm
Forum: Drabblenews
Topic: Wolves in parks: not "news" but fascinating nonetheless
Replies: 5
Views: 1900

Wolves in parks: not "news" but fascinating nonetheless

The effects of the reintroduction of wolves in Yellowstone National Park... amazing. :shock:

http://sfglobe.com/?id=14064&src=share_fb_new_14064
by unreliable narrator
Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:15 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: The wrong time

pondspider wrote:Her eyes met mine. Ruby lips inviting.
"Sometimes when we touch
the honesty's too much",
she said, handing me my change.
I really like this one... just the right kinda weird. :D
by unreliable narrator
Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:10 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

SpareInch wrote:I must have made a mistake when ordering my online Apocalypse.
What the hell do I do with Four Oarsmen and Seven Sea Lions?
Nice one! :D
by unreliable narrator
Sun Sep 28, 2014 4:03 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Windows of the Soul?
Replies: 8
Views: 2061

Re: Windows of the Soul?

Thanks Horrorshow! I really struggle with the 100 word format because it's so restricting... somethings got to go, be it characterisation, background, setting or whatever, but really glad you liked it! As a result of my struggling I thought it might be fun to do a sequel drabble story to give anothe...
by unreliable narrator
Sat Sep 27, 2014 7:41 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Windows of the Soul?
Replies: 8
Views: 2061

Windows of the Soul?

Cecilia despised her synthetic eyes. She sat by the mirror each evening gazing at her reflection, her china face perfectly painted, and dark curls falling in neat ringlets. Over time the plan had come to her, and tonight she would act. The cat spat and paced inside its crate as she approached, tail ...
by unreliable narrator
Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:11 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Sometimes I wonder about the decisions I've made... particularly today, when the police arrived to dig up my basement.
by unreliable narrator
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:57 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I've heard some guys relish the thrill of the chase. I don't subscribe to that. I much prefer the the torture and killing. It may look like it's perfect length in the Twitfic Sizer, but on a proofreading level, it's actually only 97 characters long. :D Did you see what I did there? :D I've heard so...
by unreliable narrator
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:07 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I've heard some guys relish the thrill of the chase.
I don't subscribe to that.
I much prefer the the torture and killing.
by unreliable narrator
Wed Sep 24, 2014 7:01 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Social media pisses me off sometimes... you murder one girl you met online, and suddenly you're "The Facebook Killer."
by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 23, 2014 7:12 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

My little boy was playing 'Doctors' with his friend Emily yesterday.
I wasn't worried... then he showed me the scalpel.
by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 23, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Strawman opened his present excitedly.
Dorothy's grin broadened.
Uncomprehending, he gazed at the zippo in his hand.

Happy birthday strawman! :)
by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 23, 2014 1:01 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I enjoy track and field events. I tie the victim to the track, then after the train passes by, I bury the remains in a field.
by unreliable narrator
Tue Sep 16, 2014 6:21 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7563
Views: 891166

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I was strolling in the park this morning when I saw a guy picking up dog shit.
Then I noticed he didn't have a dog... or a bag.