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by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:59 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 1376

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

parsec or not rish i say awesome title. either that or "salt the wound".
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:57 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Lunchroom Leviathan
Replies: 4
Views: 675

Re: Lunchroom Leviathan

your creativity must be turned all the way up man, great visuals and awesome drabble. your on a roll dude.
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:54 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 1809

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

im actually surprised that of all the posts the only thing everyone seems to agree on is the quotation on real (which is "gone" now). seeing the way a few words can kind of push an audience when you see the alternative version of whats being presented kind of makes me glad i posted both. they both s...
by zcarter80
Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Nothing At All
Replies: 4
Views: 839

Re: Nothing At All

hilarious!!
by zcarter80
Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:53 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 1376

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

those are even better.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:19 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Ministry of Love, Grammar Bureau
Replies: 8
Views: 872

Re: Ministry of Love, Grammar Bureau

you are kicking ass and taking names at this drabbel game my man. Excellent concepts and delivery on every one so far. cant wait to see something of yours recorded. Or rather Hear something of yours recorded. better watch my step, i dont want to be sanctioned or fined.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:16 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: C:/dat/girl
Replies: 1
Views: 494

Re: C:/dat/girl

woah man. nicely done. and kind of dark considering it wasn't munsi writing it but brilliant in its simplicity.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 10:13 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Plan B
Replies: 1
Views: 485

Re: Plan B

always have your priorities in order.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:32 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Books
Replies: 5
Views: 640

Re: Books

can a computer properly recite klaatu barada nikto?
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:29 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Knocking can also come from within
Replies: 4
Views: 874

Re: Knocking can also come from within

you left it just ominous enough and it was thought provoking. bravo my good man, that's some grade A drabbeling!
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 9:26 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: *Trying to think of a title*
Replies: 13
Views: 1376

Re: *Trying to think of a title*

nice one. it all comes full circle. i would say something like "full circle" or "hunter and prey" or something but even without a title its brilliant.
by zcarter80
Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 1809

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

i wrote it so his grandpa coming in seemed like a normal occurrence, which it is and you are meant to assume is something innocent but in the end you see that even though its routine it is definitely not a wanted visit. how would you have changed it to make it clearer?
by zcarter80
Wed Feb 02, 2011 3:39 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 901

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

thanks!
by zcarter80
Tue Feb 01, 2011 6:12 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 1809

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

that was what i was going for in the piece in its original draft. thanks for the feedback guys. i have a child and i know that subject matter is off putting but i would put my kid in a room full of demons for a week before i put her in a room with 1 pedophile for a half hour. so this is more "scary ...
by zcarter80
Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:57 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 901

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

Free drabble, the beer is free too but the curse comes with it.
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:42 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 901

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

depends on the brand but i agree.
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 901

Beckoned by My Beverage

Beckoned by My Beverage Ingredients coalesce in the mixer on the counter. I hit “frappe”, encouraging the aroma from my brew to snake out onto the breeze. Moments later I pour the frothy liquid into a chalice as my neighbor Beth’s husband stands on his porch scenting the air like a hungry dog. His s...
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:31 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 1809

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

me too, i was just kind of torn on it because in the first he isnt afraid of shadows or monsters but in the end he fears grandpa more. but the 2nd has that heightened fear all throughout.
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Buried Alive
Replies: 8
Views: 1318

Re: Buried Alive

lol! shouldnt Ryan Reynolds be singing that?
by zcarter80
Mon Jan 31, 2011 5:44 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 1809

Some Monsters May Tuck You In

WARNING!!! The following drabble was written in 2 versions and has some darker themes but I would like a little feedback to see which version is better written, if you guys can manage it. Thanks in advance. Some Monsters May Tuck You In (Version 1) Shadows dance in the moon light coming in through m...