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by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:36 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Harvest
Replies: 1
Views: 314

Re: Harvest

I like this one. i don't get it exactly, but I like it. Welcome to the Forums manintheshack!
by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:34 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Reunion
Replies: 7
Views: 898

Re: Reunion

i didn't see that one coming
by flyawaybefree
Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:39 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Stargazer
Replies: 2
Views: 512

Stargazer

Avoiding my homework, I lie on the grassy ground, peacefully gazing up at the myriad stars. The air is warm, with the slightest cool breeze that brushes across my face as I admire their formations and twinkling beauty. I remember fondly when I was a child and my father had pointed out constellations...
by flyawaybefree
Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:26 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Overlooked Details
Replies: 4
Views: 617

Re: Overlooked Details

the wasps in death activate their extra special robot cloaking devices
by flyawaybefree
Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:20 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Faith Healer
Replies: 6
Views: 770

Re: Faith Healer

I like this one, but I feel like something should be said to build up to the robot's evilness, for example bits about the horrific was between robots and humans or something like that, and then focus on the woman's emotions while she's deciding to help this robot. That would make it a stronger piece...
by flyawaybefree
Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:17 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Just Like Bella
Replies: 6
Views: 781

Re: Just Like Bella

you are absolutely brilliant.
by flyawaybefree
Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:16 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Spaceship Wrecked
Replies: 2
Views: 711

Re: Spaceship Wrecked

very topical, this one.
by flyawaybefree
Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:42 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Who Could Have Known?
Replies: 4
Views: 600

Who Could Have Known?

Who could have known? Even as the telltale signs appeared? Humanity was never prepared for something like this. Maybe the virus is just too strong for us. Is this how humanity is destined to end? They say we created the disease in a secret lab. Then it spread. It enhanced emotions, bolstering anger,...
by flyawaybefree
Tue Sep 07, 2010 2:25 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Power of Love*
Replies: 3
Views: 551

Re: The Power of Love*

The power of love: to fire up an entire mega-army of giant robots who proceed to destroy the entire loveless world. Interesting.
by flyawaybefree
Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:18 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Agoraphobia
Replies: 2
Views: 577

Re: Agoraphobia

I was kinda proud of this one....
by flyawaybefree
Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:18 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Practical Demonstration
Replies: 3
Views: 569

Re: Practical Demonstration

I can really picture this one... hopefully the audience will survive.
by flyawaybefree
Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:14 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: A Sad End
Replies: 7
Views: 765

Re: A Sad End

I want a talking coffee cup! Especially one that is the last human-made technology...
by flyawaybefree
Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:40 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Identity
Replies: 3
Views: 513

Re: Identity

I'd like to think that life does extend beyond death, but ti does make one contemplate. Kind of makes me think of episode 149...
by flyawaybefree
Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:12 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Ship
Replies: 4
Views: 605

Re: The Ship

I am now thoroughly afraid of sleepwalkers.
by flyawaybefree
Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:10 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Assurances
Replies: 5
Views: 619

Re: Assurances

ah, the killling machine aliens descend, promising to break every treaty and slaughter every one of us! Fun stuff!
by flyawaybefree
Sat Sep 04, 2010 4:08 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Satellite
Replies: 3
Views: 465

Re: Satellite

The end of earth from a highly unconventional standpoint. I really like the characterization of such a standard object. I fell sad for the lonely satellite!
by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:43 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Orientation
Replies: 1
Views: 355

Re: Orientation

I would love to be Oriented by actually going to asia! I think that they last line loses a bit of your usual punch though.
by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:39 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Power
Replies: 3
Views: 585

Re: The Power

I like the idea of this one, but I think that it could come across a little better, with more emotion or description of current. there must be a reason why he doesn't want it, and i think that that would be interesting to see exactly why that is.
by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:36 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Oracle
Replies: 4
Views: 879

Re: The Oracle

I love this one! One of your best endings by far.
by flyawaybefree
Fri Sep 03, 2010 2:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Picture Day
Replies: 0
Views: 576

Picture Day

“Hey Stacy!” Lillith gestured her over. “O-my-maggots you look gorgeous!” “Thanks, like, I know…” Jenny and Natalia joined them. “Oh! I love the new rotting flesh makeup! And your green mold mascara seems to be working for you!” Natalia said. “Stacy, how do you always get the most stylish grungy rip...