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by uncre8d1
Thu Nov 01, 2012 2:02 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Chains
Replies: 2
Views: 624

Re: Chains

Very nice, munsi. I've been away from the forums for quite some time, and it's nice to know the madness continues unabated.
by uncre8d1
Wed Oct 31, 2012 8:27 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Oncoming Storm
Replies: 0
Views: 608

Oncoming Storm

The waves roll slowly across the sea of tall grain, softly whistling through immature seed pods, and I shift my position slightly to lessen the pain in my arm. The wind is a gust front, the herald of an oncoming storm which will drown my scent for a while. A moot point once the rain eats through my ...
by uncre8d1
Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:27 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cognition
Replies: 5
Views: 730

Re: Cognition

Like it. My dog is just like this, though thankfully he hasn't encountered this exact situation.
by uncre8d1
Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:24 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Pavor Nocturnus
Replies: 10
Views: 1345

Re: Pavor Nocturnus

Oooh, creepy.
Happy to say that my kids have only awakened with a scream two or three times, and I hope I can never sympathize with you here :-)
by uncre8d1
Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:15 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Curtain’s Up, Sir Richard (Zombies Theme)
Replies: 3
Views: 1919

Re: Curtain’s Up, Sir Richard (Zombies Theme)

Very nice.
by uncre8d1
Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:14 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Lone Star War: 2212 AD (mech theme)
Replies: 5
Views: 1367

Re: The Lone Star War: 2212 AD (mech theme)

I like this one a lot.
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:09 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Spread the Word (alien theme)
Replies: 14
Views: 1927

Re: Spread the Word (alien theme)

Sagan and Darwin as religious figures ... Interesting -- and accurate, methinks. Yeah, I've had a lot of conversations with people who claim to be staunchly anti-religion, but almost none of them have put any more thought into what they believe than have the people they mock - and having blind, unq...
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:16 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Pauli's Fallacy
Replies: 5
Views: 899

Re: Pauli's Fallacy

Love this one!
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:13 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Little Sally (Zombies theme)
Replies: 3
Views: 774

Re: Little Sally (Zombies theme)

Heh.

Maybe it's just me, but I find the cute-kid-out-of-place to be the most consistently creepy element in fiction. Like walking through a dark abandoned school and hearing a kid's laughter down the hall.
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:09 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Probably No Cake
Replies: 2
Views: 602

Re: Probably No Cake

Nice one, keep it up.


Also...graduating?? For me, twabbles are twice as tough as drabbles.
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The somnambulist
Replies: 4
Views: 1580

Re: The somnambulist

Thanks for the feedback, uncre8d1. First Drabble...and perhaps a little inspired by my history of childhood sleepwalking. Definitely tough to stick to the word limit, especially because I felt compelled to answer the very questions you posed. But I guess that's the beauty of the Drabble - not answe...
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 16, 2012 3:56 pm
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 236 – When You Visit The Magoebaskloof Hotel..
Replies: 12
Views: 3549

Re: Drabblecast 236 – When You Visit The Magoebaskloof Hotel

Thanks again for picking my drabble, Norm. It sounded great!
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:12 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Issue With Time Travel
Replies: 11
Views: 1954

Re: The Issue With Time Travel

That would be a fine solution, assuming that you have a way to track the receiver through spacetime, some unique transtemporal carrier wave to home in on. Otherwise the receiver is just another bullseye for a blind sniper.
Hey, do you mind if I use this idea for a story?
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:35 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Issue With Time Travel
Replies: 11
Views: 1954

Re: The Issue With Time Travel

As much as I like SF, this has always been my complaint with time travel stories. In order to fix an exit point, you have to know not only your absolute position in the universe (by finding one unmoving reference point in spacetime - good luck), but you also have to know every force that affects the...
by uncre8d1
Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:18 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Respawn
Replies: 7
Views: 789

Re: Respawn

Loren Eaton wrote:@uncre8d1: Gracias! I was hugely bummed when my rented copy of Moon had a scratch that made the final ten minutes unplayable. It just isn't the same reading the ending on Wikipedia, is it?
No, no it is not. Same thing happened with my Redbox rental of Equilibrium.
by uncre8d1
Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Respawn
Replies: 7
Views: 789

Re: Respawn

'Gamer' meets 'Moon.' Like it.
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Penny For Your Thoughts
Replies: 2
Views: 536

Re: Penny For Your Thoughts

I love this.
Ever read 'Daemon' by Daniel Suarez? Aside from being a great book, it makes great use of AR.

Also, I approve of referring to a geek as sexy. :wink:
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:26 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The somnambulist
Replies: 4
Views: 1580

Re: The somnambulist

Nice first post. Welcome. I don't know if this was your intention, but this got me thinking about the main character's experience. Does he remember and enjoy his dreams, or has he just learned to put his best foot forward in an uncontrollable situation? Is he lucid dreaming, aware that he's dreaming...
by uncre8d1
Wed Mar 07, 2012 4:14 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: To Rend the Caul of Their Heart
Replies: 8
Views: 1509

Re: To Rend the Caul of Their Heart

And you got that idea across well. I dunno, maybe it's just me, but the tone seems to shift suddenly in the last line. I really like the drabble.
by uncre8d1
Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:09 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7597
Views: 983101

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

You may ask why we chose you. We were a little pressed for time, and you alone in the 'Wal-mart' zone wore clean underwear.