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My forebears would be appalled. - @)) Drabble

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:00 am
by themorg
My forebears would be appalled
By Morgan Olson

The hunting instincts ran deep within my clan.
Motionless, I watched the trail for half an hour as lesser game passed
I was after the true prize
Nothing less would satisfy my deep hunger.
Keeping still and making little noise to alert the catch to where I lay.
My eyes focused on where each tiny noise came from.
Every honed sense quivered for the chase.
Recognition
It tingled through the tongue as saliva pooled in my mouth.
My instincts keen as I raised and ready to pounce.
“Dan, for the last time that is my Moutian Dew, you jerk.”

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Re: My forebears would be appalled.

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:13 am
by themorg
this always happens i am about to type something about something i read and there a little Drabble just falls out of my head. thanks to ROU Killing time with the line
ROU Killing Time wrote:
Yes, NYE is amateur nite, but then again I'm an amateur drinker, so it fits. (My forebears would be appalled.)

Re: My forebears would be appalled.

Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:43 pm
by ROU Killing Time
themorg wrote:this always happens i am about to type something about something i read and there a little Drabble just falls out of my head. thanks to ROU Killing time with the line
ROU Killing Time wrote:
Yes, NYE is amateur nite, but then again I'm an amateur drinker, so it fits. (My forebears would be appalled.)
Anytime, Morg. Even though I'm in a blocked phase, at least I can still inspire. (Maybe I need you so fed-ex some good old Portland Bull-run water out here to the east coast.)

Needs some spell-checking though and a grammer tightening pass. (That's not intended as a negative, if ya look at my earlier drabbles the threads show multiple passes. Part of the process, of course.)