Vampire's Bane

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Vampire's Bane

Post by CLP » Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:20 pm

The vampire slithered through the shadows, stalking its prey. The woman’s savory scent made it swoon in anticipation, but it waited for the perfect opportunity.

The vampire pounced, subdued the woman, clamped its cadaverous claws over her lips, suppressing any scream. It sank its fangs deep into soft flesh and sucked.

No Blood.

Confounded, the vampire bit, ripped and tore at the neck, revealing wires and metal. The woman twisted free of the vampire’s clutches, punched through its chest with all her robot strength and extracted its shriveled, blackened heart. The heart quivered and crumbled to dust in her fist.
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Re: Vampire's Bane

Post by strawman » Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:32 pm

Ah, the Vampire-bot Strikeforce turns the tide. Unit motto: Bite this, Sucka!
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Re: Vampire's Bane

Post by Mr. Tweedy » Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:23 pm


(That was my review.)
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Re: Vampire's Bane

Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:40 am

ROU likes this one. :thumbs:
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