My Secret

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My Secret

Post by peteyfrogboy » Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:44 pm

Victor stepped out of the shadowy alley, just a step behind golden-haired Eliza. He grabbed her arm with a hand both gentle and strong as steel.

"You've been following me for weeks," he said.

Eliza stopped. "I can't help it. You fascinate me."

Victor heard her steady heartbeat. "You know my secret, then?"

"You're a vampire," she whispered.

"You're not afraid?" His breath brushed her exposed neck.


Victor bared his fangs. The razor sharp teeth pierced Eliza's skin, drew her coppery blood, then scraped against titanium bones.

Eliza giggled as her eyes glowed. "I have a secret too..."

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Re: My Secret

Post by ROU Killing Time » Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:30 pm

Drabbilus Crossgenreness.

Always nice to have some fresh coppery blood in the drabbles forums.
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Re: My Secret

Post by strawman » Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:42 pm

Immune to mosquitoes, too. Nice.
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