Cloud and Sky

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Cloud and Sky

Post by uncre8d1 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:26 pm

Yep. It was him all right.
Shouting Cloud walked slowly down the street, his usual furtive glances replaced by total indifference. Most of the people of Silver Creek either didn’t know the particulars or didn’t believe. Not yet, anyway.

Cloud warned me a few days ago to leave town, I didn’t listen, and this morning the sky was boiling. He’d been reading signs for years, telling us that Sky Father was coming.

Closer. No, not indifference; emptiness. God alone knew where Shouting Cloud had gone.
See, turns out there’s a whole mess of Sky Fathers. All with long shining rifles.

9/13/2010

*title edited*
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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by swamp » Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:26 pm

Possible title: Cloud and Sky

I like it. Welcome to the Drabblers Club!

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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by uncre8d1 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:45 pm

Hey, nice title! Thanks!
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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by ROU Killing Time » Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:54 am

Willkommen :)
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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by Scattercat » Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:22 pm

"The Happy Hunting Grounds"?

"By the River of Stars"?

"Coyote Tales"?

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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by swamp » Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:06 pm

I recorded this for The Dribblecast under the title "Cloud and Sky". It is up on the feed now. Be careful of the volume, there is a loud part.

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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by uncre8d1 » Fri Sep 17, 2010 8:04 pm

awesome. getting it now!
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Re: My first Drabble, needs a title

Post by uncre8d1 » Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:11 am

Sounds great. Thanks so much!
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Re: Cloud and Sky

Post by uncre8d1 » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:27 pm

Bump for alien theme
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