The Feast

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flyawaybefree
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The Feast

Post by flyawaybefree » Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:41 pm

She walked with poise and grace evident of her royal upbringing. Each step placed carefully as she descended the stairs in her silky gown to the applause of her guests, dignitaries and diplomats. Her dark hair fell in corkscrew curls over her shoulders, her eyes a sparkling chocolate brown. She looked as though she was laughing to herself, a small kink in the corner of her lips.

She smiled, revealing a set of highly pointed teeth.

And she lunged.
Someone tried to scream, but it was no use.

With the full moon high in the sky, it was feeding time.
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

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Re: The Feast

Post by strawman » Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:46 pm

I always suspected the Royal family had another skeleton in its closet, but the Queen? And the Daily Mail missed it?
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Re: The Feast

Post by manintheshack » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:59 pm

I like it, but can't help thinking that it would have added something if cheers of jubilation went up from the crowd. For Queen and country! And snack-time!
"I kick arse for the Lord."

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Re: The Feast

Post by flyawaybefree » Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:59 am

Thanks for the feedback!
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

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