One Sunny Day

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One Sunny Day

Post by manintheshack » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:23 pm

I was four years old when my mother threw herself into Rathsrock Gorge. I was there at the time, mere metres from the cliff’s edge when she kissed me and whispered goodbye. I didn’t see her fall, didn’t hear her screams, but I often dream of her tumbling into that ravine in acceptance of her fate.

When she dropped from sight I clawed my way to the edge. I remember looking at the lifeless shape below. On instinct I wanted to follow, but my father held me back. “No, son,” he said, smiling sympathetically. “Your mother deserved it. You don’t.”
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by CLP » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:45 pm

yikes/ awsome!
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by Phenopath » Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:26 pm

Holy crap!
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by Scattercat » Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:46 pm

Hahaha! Nice.

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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by flyawaybefree » Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:10 am

Oh man. You could write a whole book about what's going on in this drabble. great job!
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by Phenopath » Sat Oct 16, 2010 11:39 pm

Dribbled.
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by bell » Sun Oct 17, 2010 2:03 am

Phenopath wrote:Dribbled.
With the scream from BLOWOUT?
http://www.apoGrypha.blogspot.com" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;

What would have been written.
Spoiler:
If they hadn't died first.

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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by dreamrock » Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:13 am

bell wrote:
Phenopath wrote:Dribbled.
With the scream from BLOWOUT?
Yay, Bell is back. :D Missed you, man. :0
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Re: One Sunny Day

Post by bell » Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:26 am

I lurked, especially in Dribblecast.

Fine work, those last few months.
http://www.apoGrypha.blogspot.com" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;

What would have been written.
Spoiler:
If they hadn't died first.

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