I Am Immortal

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CLP
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I Am Immortal

Post by CLP » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:49 pm

I suddenly realize I am immortal. None of this can hurt me.

My squad yells for me to stop, but I stride unarmed towards the enemy. Confusion is evident on their faces.

Halfway across the battlefield, a sniper shoots me in the chest. I stop, but don’t fall. There is pain, but it’s someone else’s pain, miles away.

The next is a headshot.

I don’t fall. Primal fear spreads like a disease amongst the enemy. They unleash a barrage of bullets that tears away my flesh prison, piece by piece.

Free at last!

The enemy is powerless to stop me.
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Re: I Am Immortal

Post by flyawaybefree » Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:21 am

The terminators reveal themselves at last....
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

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Re: I Am Immortal

Post by Scattercat » Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:02 am

A spirit de corpse?

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Re: I Am Immortal

Post by strawman » Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:08 am

I see what you did!
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
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Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: I Am Immortal

Post by CLP » Thu Sep 16, 2010 11:33 am

Scattercat wrote:A spirit de corpse?

Ha ha! Nice :D
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Re: I Am Immortal

Post by uncre8d1 » Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:51 am

This story is about Shatner, right? Because Chuck Norris is bulletproof.
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