Love Potion #8

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munsi
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Love Potion #8

Post by munsi » Thu Nov 18, 2010 1:55 pm

She drank my love potion, and loved.

You could see it in her face, brighter, more vivid. As though worlds of possibility had opened up. Possibilities she’d never known or, perhaps, simply perspective on what she’d known forever.

She ran to the open window, screaming affirmations into the street below, at people who stared up as though she were a lunatic.

But she didn’t care, too filled was she with joy at being alive.

She’d developed perfect, undying love for the universe, in all it’s wonders and complexity, and for everything within it.

Yet still, she did not love ME….

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Re: Love Potion #8

Post by strawman » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:21 pm

Yet even more still, I am fulfilled by the fact that our relationship is now absolutely unique and exclusive.
She knows no shadow but mine.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: Love Potion #8

Post by mrsmica » Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:47 am

ooooOooo

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Re: Love Potion #8

Post by Thomas Daulton » Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:44 am

The title's awesome! You can just hear the narrator saying "Back to the drawing board..."
"All that is gold does not glitter; not all those that wander are lost." --J.R.R. TOLKIEN

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