The survivors story.

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The survivors story.

Post by FAIL:SAFE » Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:25 pm

They rode out in a halo of burning magnesia light, leaving slicks of pooled hydragyrum in their wake. 

I crawled out from behind the wreckage of the mangled, bullet ridden Harley's and made my way to my broken brothers. My entire  gangs Kevlar vests were perforated like fish net tights. 

A thousand glittering holes In the wall behind me caught my eye before I saw a lead pipe in a dead gang banger's hand, somehow shining in the fading flare of their departure. 

To this day I pray to my pantheon that I never see the sons of alchemy again. 
I can do it quickly, cheaply or properly- but not all three at once.

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Re: The survivors story.

Post by Mr. Tweedy » Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:24 am

Boo! Hiss!
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Re: The survivors story.

Post by FAIL:SAFE » Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:42 am

Boo? hiss?

I thought it was alright, deserving of a "meh" perhaps, but not a boohiss surely.

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