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The survivors story.

Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2011 4:25 pm
by FAIL:SAFE
They rode out in a halo of burning magnesia light, leaving slicks of pooled hydragyrum in their wake. 

I crawled out from behind the wreckage of the mangled, bullet ridden Harley's and made my way to my broken brothers. My entire  gangs Kevlar vests were perforated like fish net tights. 

A thousand glittering holes In the wall behind me caught my eye before I saw a lead pipe in a dead gang banger's hand, somehow shining in the fading flare of their departure. 

To this day I pray to my pantheon that I never see the sons of alchemy again. 

Re: The survivors story.

Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:24 am
by Mr. Tweedy
Boo! Hiss!

Re: The survivors story.

Posted: Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:42 am
by FAIL:SAFE
Boo? hiss?

I thought it was alright, deserving of a "meh" perhaps, but not a boohiss surely.

F:S