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Post by Lone Mopper » Thu Dec 13, 2012 9:08 pm

Peering through the dirty, greasy, smoke stained door he grimaced then pushed his way in.

He sighed and started ranting immediately, “You do not top seared portabella mushrooms with Crazy Dave’s BBQ sauce that is too much salt, this oven is burning everything, you don’t spread caviar on PBJ, this place is filthy, something in that salad is moving, and does that person over there have a tail? Why won’t that radio station play a different song?

Lucifer chuckled then replied, ‘that is Queen’s Fat Bottom Girls, it’s always on and what part of ‘Hell’s Kitchen don’t you understand Ramsay?
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Re: Order Up

Post by basilgodevenos » Fri Dec 14, 2012 5:06 pm

Heh. Nothing like a little come-uppance. Or however you spell that.
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