Distant Echoes of a Story Long Forgotten

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Flintknapper
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Distant Echoes of a Story Long Forgotten

Post by Flintknapper » Fri May 10, 2013 4:55 pm

The archaeologist pointed to the petroglyphs on the rock. There was a bird which soared high above a spiraled sun. Below a mountain goat was chased by human-like figures adorned with masks. They carried shields and spears. A plumed serpent stretched beneath their feet.

He spent time detailing to us the intricacies of the patterns and the expected time period to which this particular rock panel dated. Our guide pointed out the skill and craftsmanship it took to peck the stone and the hours, perhaps even days, invested in constructing it. He spoke of it telling a story long forgotten.

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Re: Distant Echoes of a Story Long Forgotten

Post by strawman » Fri May 10, 2013 8:13 pm

Chased -BY- human...
Each of the sentences in 2nd paragraph begins with 'He'.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: Distant Echoes of a Story Long Forgotten

Post by tibbi » Tue Sep 30, 2014 2:27 am

New dribblecast produced with this drabble. Hope it pleases. :)

http://www.dribblecast.org/2014/09/29/d ... forgotten/
And thus ends my $.02. :)

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