Welcome to Paradise (Relocation)

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Bejami
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Welcome to Paradise (Relocation)

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I wake to knifing sensations throughout my body, submerged to my neck in a boiling, sulfurous muck.

The man beside me is paralyzed with agony. I enjoy his screams as glimmers of yesterday return to me. I remember the state provided gourmet meal; a grim looking officer; the family across the glass, looking for some sign that I felt anything other than pleasure at the actions that robbed them of their dear father; and the ecstasy of the electric chair coursing through me—not unlike what I feel right now.

I'm in Hell, and I think I'm going to like it.
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Cwpants
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I guess a sadomasochist would enjoy Christian hell...I never thought of that. It's a twisted tale...I like it!
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Oh boy. This was deeply disturbed... Just my kind of thing. Two tentacles up!
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submerged to my neck in a boiling, sulfurous muck.
Well, hello. I live in Louisiana too!
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