Eternal Buzzing (Most Irratating Thing Ever theme)

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Eternal Buzzing (Most Irratating Thing Ever theme)

Post by Tifarak » Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:10 pm

Alone together between four padded walls. The buzzing fly drives me mad day and night after restless night. Six legs on my face and whispers of wind around my ears, but I am defenseless in this jacket. After years of tormented imprisonment I finally understand Christ's meaning when he said that some of those alive would not taste death until his return. This fly that had been there, was trapped with him in the tomb and ate of his flesh. One day I shall catch the fly. Then begins my life anew; to consume the consumer is to live eternal.
GRAVE, n. A place in which the dead are laid to await the coming of the medical student.- Ambrose Bierce

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Post by strawman » Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:31 pm

Two orders of business:
1) A hearty welcome, Tifarak. We celebrate fresh blood in these parts.
2) A rebuke, for shortchanging us on wordcount. Gimme 5.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

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Post by Tifarak » Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:42 pm

Sorry, newbie mistake. I'll fix it now!
GRAVE, n. A place in which the dead are laid to await the coming of the medical student.- Ambrose Bierce

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Post by gunsofchekhovia » Sat Sep 28, 2013 4:51 pm

Renfield, is that you?

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Post by strawman » Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:21 pm

gunsofchekhovia wrote:Renfield, is that you?
Something tells me this should be a classic.
Like "Watson, come here. I want to see you."
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: Eternal Buzzing (Most Irratating Thing Ever theme)

Post by Flintknapper » Sat Sep 28, 2013 8:51 pm

Why do the crazies always eat flies?

I liked it. Welcome Tifarak!

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Post by Tifarak » Sat Sep 28, 2013 11:04 pm

Flintknapper wrote:Why do the crazies always eat flies?

I liked it. Welcome Tifarak!
Thanks, I really like what you all have going on here. Even if reading most of it aloud will cost you your sanity...
GRAVE, n. A place in which the dead are laid to await the coming of the medical student.- Ambrose Bierce

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Re: Eternal Buzzing (Most Irratating Thing Ever theme)

Post by Varda » Sun Sep 29, 2013 1:35 am

Welcome, welcome Tifarak! Don't mind the buzzing. One of us is a zombie, but we're not sure who yet.

Loved your debut drabble. Creative and a little unnerving. Flies are pretty much the most irritating thing ever, especially if you have high ceilings and short legs...
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Re: Eternal Buzzing (Most Irratating Thing Ever theme)

Post by strawman » Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:54 am

DC Factoid: Beelzebub :twisted:
from Baal Zebub, meaning Lord of Flies
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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