Into the void

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unseentangerine
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Into the void

Post by unseentangerine » Mon Apr 21, 2014 10:44 pm

I wrote a drabble in the shower today! I might start taking showers more often.

The land gushed from hidden magma pockets
And unbidden came old gods and creeds and prophets
Once adored, they were then by their own peoples deplored
For from their altars fear and weakness poured
The ground was rent in two and from the glowing vent
Flew growling intonations from some ancient event
Fire fell and ashes rose as the heated air dared expose
That the sky was black and now it shows
The torn, strewn hearts of stars and worlds
In chaos more than their beginning, smashed and hurled
The gaping chasm’s song is calling those remaining
Into the void
Many on the forum have asked me, so here's my answer: a spoonful of lighter fluid. And you'll need to wash it out really well when you're done.

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Re: Into the void

Post by JarodKAnderson » Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:09 pm

I like it! I used to write in the shower. I ruined more laptops that way...

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Re: Into the void

Post by unseentangerine » Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:21 pm

Dude, the water wasn't running. I was just in the shower.
Many on the forum have asked me, so here's my answer: a spoonful of lighter fluid. And you'll need to wash it out really well when you're done.

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