Best Ever
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Best Ever
"OK kids, who wants a balloon hat!"
"This clown is lame and scary!"
"How about you Timmy, it is your birthday after all!"
The clown twisted together some balloons. Little did the children know that the balloons would be twisted into an evil shape that would eat the mind of Timmy, feeding the clown.
The clown raised the diabolical balloon hat to Timmy's head. Two bright glints of metal flew through the air, slicing through the balloons, popping them, then burying into the clowns chest.
The clown toppled over, dead.
The children cheered.
"This is the best party ever, Timmy!"
"This clown is lame and scary!"
"How about you Timmy, it is your birthday after all!"
The clown twisted together some balloons. Little did the children know that the balloons would be twisted into an evil shape that would eat the mind of Timmy, feeding the clown.
The clown raised the diabolical balloon hat to Timmy's head. Two bright glints of metal flew through the air, slicing through the balloons, popping them, then burying into the clowns chest.
The clown toppled over, dead.
The children cheered.
"This is the best party ever, Timmy!"
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Almost all (or all, perhaps) are from my entries into the 100 Word Stories Weekly Challenge.
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Great stuff. I love the phrase "bright glints of metal". It just sounds... right.
Also, you mean to tell me that there's been a 100 word story contest and no one told me? Time to whip up some more drabbles...
Also, you mean to tell me that there's been a 100 word story contest and no one told me? Time to whip up some more drabbles...
Philosophy is a game with objectives and no rules. Mathematics is a game with rules and no objectives.
You're always the hero in your own story - life is about not being the villain in anyone else's.
You're always the hero in your own story - life is about not being the villain in anyone else's.
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