Sympathy for a Clown, Part 1: Prodrabble

100 word stories. Post all you like, maybe we'll dip in and use yours?

Did Miss Grimsley succeed in polishing this drabble?

Yes, stunning. Where can I get Miss G's phone #
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No, get a new editor, better yet, give up drabbling
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Needs more work, but you are almost there
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Total votes: 4

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Re: Sympathy for a Clown, Part 1: Prodrabble

Post by ROU Killing Time » Thu Aug 13, 2009 6:50 am

Phenopath wrote:
ROU Killing Time wrote: Like a sadistic surgeon was straining at the gears of a rib-spreader, ...
Needs a tweak methinks ;)
You clearly called that one, Pheno. Cast your vote as to whether it's corrected suitably...
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