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No wrong answers

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2016 10:10 am
by flashj
  • Black sheep in the fog, always getting closer.
    Wet plastic against, ice. Wet ice with bubbles beneath.
    Hills denuded of trees, of life.
    More black sheep, these with accusing eyes.
    A shadow in an office window, abandoned and alone.
How many more do you need?

  • My fathers smirk, also in shadow.
    Grandma's porcelain doll. It's broken but I didn't do it!
    The underside of clouds before a cleansing rain.
    Hell I dunno...a pile of hot wings? Bone in. Lots and lots of sauce!
Why am I seeing so many sheep?
Stupid Rorschach test! So what did I win?

Re: No wrong answers

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2019 2:02 am
by ZimmermansWay
Great visuals, a stream-consciousness I'd love to take a raft down

Re: No wrong answers

Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2019 10:19 pm
by MementoHero
I agree with Zimmerman. Also I laughed. Not sure if you were aiming for that but it came off as funny in that disconnected Drabblecasty way.

Though at the end I felt maybe our protagonist should have a Voight-Kampff test as well. Maybe it just reminded me of Blade Runner... but in any case well done I loved it.

Re: No wrong answers

Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2019 4:52 pm
Wow. This gives me an ominous, skin-crawly feeling. Fantastic imagery. I will never look at sheep the same way again.