What the Bouncer Saw

100 word stories. Post all you like, maybe we'll dip in and use yours?
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What the Bouncer Saw

Post by flashj » Tue Apr 05, 2016 10:25 am

The bouncer saw me head straight for the tequila.
The bouncer saw me shout "Last Man Standing!"
The bouncer saw Doyle shout back "Who you calling a man?"
The bouncer saw me match him shot for shot.
The bouncer saw me nail "Green Hills of Earth!"
Doyle was the only one who knew the words.
The Bouncer saw no point in resisting and joined in.
The Bouncer saw the drinks, the slime, the...the pseudopods.
The bouncer helped me pour Doyle into a cab. And I mean pour.
I need to go back and tip that bouncer.
And maybe recommend group therapy.
How many times do I have to shout "ARCH!" before it appears?

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Re: What the Bouncer Saw

Post by ZimmermansWay » Sun Mar 31, 2019 10:33 pm

Another fun visual. Can't quite put my finger on why your posts resonate with me but they do

"We're all lying in the gutter. Some of us are just looking up at the stars."
-Oscar Wilde

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Re: What the Bouncer Saw

Post by normsherman » Mon Jun 17, 2019 10:56 pm

Yah, I like these two. They're like, unspoken Choose Your Own Adventure drabbles!
"Give us all some Jelly"

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