My view of the sketchy, hourly rate motel room disappears as a soft piece of black satin cloth covers my eyes.
“We wouldn’t want the rest of you to turn to stone, now would we?” Medusa with a hint mischief in her voice as she gently ties the blindfold around my face.
As I feel her climb on to the bed and hear her mane of serpents hiss with excitement, sudden horror and apprehension wash over me. Oh my god! Why hadn’t I thought of this before? If her hair is made of snakes...does the carpet match the drapes?
one night stand
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WeaselMaster
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Re: one night stand
Oh. Oh oww. Yeah, that's an uncomfortable thought.
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ZimmermansWay
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Oh wow, this one made me simultaneously laugh and cry out loud! Well done sir!
That final punch line is a really well-crafted sentence with a lot of subtle nuances. I almost wanna get that tattooed somewhere...
That final punch line is a really well-crafted sentence with a lot of subtle nuances. I almost wanna get that tattooed somewhere...
...Zimmerman...
"We're all lying in the gutter. Some of us are just looking up at the stars."
-Oscar Wilde
"We're all lying in the gutter. Some of us are just looking up at the stars."
-Oscar Wilde
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MementoHero
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Holy shit I love this.
"We were all here. We are all totally and fully alive." - Alasdair Stuart
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LordKawaii
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Re: one night stand
Nicely done! Good lead up to a fantastic payoff.
Re: one night stand
This is just so awesome.
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The_Hol-Man
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Ha, I like it! Great payoff, and it definitely makes one wonder what she had turned to stone in the first place. 
--Andy
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