Last Rites

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Last Rites

Post by rowan_bristol » Sat Jul 13, 2019 9:31 am

I heard the clack of the Devil’s white shoes over the sounds of my heart monitor.

“Have you come for my soul at last?” I wheezed through the mask.

The Devil walked to my side. “I took your soul years and years ago when we made the contract. It’s long gone, fed to creditors in dimensions where hunger is the only rule. You’ve lived without one nearly all your life. There is no eternity for you.”

“If it’s already gone, then why –“ I coughed my last in agony as The Devil grinned.

“I’m just here to watch you die.”
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Re: Last Rites

Post by WeaselMaster » Sun Jul 21, 2019 5:01 pm

Oooh. Nice one. Brutal.

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