Timmy Saves the World

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Timmy Saves the World

Post by F5iver » Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:13 pm

Timmy Saves the World

Timmy peered into the cereal bowl. He saw something move. “Mommy…” Mom didn’t look. Timmy looked back at the bowl. Myriad eyes stared back at him, the cereal fluctuating like a golden swarm. Mom was on the phone.
The puffs made their way to the edge. Soon they would be over the rim. Timmy balanced the bowl between his palms, raced it to the toilet and flushed, the puffs screaming tiny cereal screams.
Mom came around the corner. “Don’t like the cereal, Honey?”
Timmy watched as the puffs disappeared. “No. It was yucky.”
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Re: Timmy Saves the World

Post by ROU Killing Time » Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:26 pm

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Re: Timmy Saves the World

Post by tbaker2500 » Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:53 am

Sounds like what happens after eating too much sugar cereal.

Good view into the child's mind. It's almost like you deal with them regularly. :-)
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