Acceptance

[Suomy Nona]

Thank you for your submission. I read your sci-fi story and was fully enthralled, so I sent it along to the other readers to get their thoughts.

I am pleased to tell you that we all loved it and would like to publish it in next month’s publication.

However, we feel there are some changes that would need to be made for our audience to fully enjoy.

Please make the following changes:

• Change to third person perspective.

• Add a comic relief character.

• Rewrite dialogue to include current popular phrases.

• Change alien species to something familiar. Intelligent primates are too implausible.