Finally, I Got an Interview!

[MattBlack1674]

The interview was short. Looking at the clock he was surprised by just how much time he had left in his day to run a couple more errands. He placed the last piece of the HR reps body, an exsanguinated forearm, on the glossy brown butcher paper. He stepped back and admired his work; the body that lay in parts on the clean boardroom table was in stark contrast to the blood coated walls. A smirk began to crawl across his face, and with his head cradled in his open palm, he thought, "now you look good on paper too."

[Suomy Nona]

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[gunsofchekhovia_111]

The punchline is great. I think the formatting could be improved. In particular, it would be a good bit more readable if you broke it into more than one paragraph. But overall, this is a fun one. Good work.

[Hobbsie]

Exsanguinated? Great word! I love the ending