Finally, I Got an Interview!

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MattBlack1674
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Finally, I Got an Interview!

Post by MattBlack1674 » Mon Sep 21, 2020 6:18 pm

The interview was short. Looking at the clock he was surprised by just how much time he had left in his day to run a couple more errands. He placed the last piece of the HR reps body, an exsanguinated forearm, on the glossy brown butcher paper. He stepped back and admired his work; the body that lay in parts on the clean boardroom table was in stark contrast to the blood coated walls. A smirk began to crawl across his face, and with his head cradled in his open palm, he thought, "now you look good on paper too."

Suomy Nona
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Re: Finally, I Got an Interview!

Post by Suomy Nona » Mon Sep 28, 2020 2:40 pm

Like it
iF I waSn’T sO bacKwardS, i’D bE anoNymouS.

gunsofchekhovia_111
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Re: Finally, I Got an Interview!

Post by gunsofchekhovia_111 » Tue Oct 06, 2020 5:07 pm

The punchline is great. I think the formatting could be improved. In particular, it would be a good bit more readable if you broke it into more than one paragraph. But overall, this is a fun one. Good work.

Hobbsie
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Re: Finally, I Got an Interview!

Post by Hobbsie » Sat Oct 10, 2020 4:44 pm

Exsanguinated? Great word! I love the ending

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