A Hole in the Ozone

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A Hole in the Ozone

Post by strawman » Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:56 pm

In the beginning, He was One.
And in His image, we were created, One.
He is still One.
But what happened to us? We divided, and then we multiplied.
One divided by one is one. One multiplied by one is one: Healthy, unitive, immortal.
But as soon as we divided in half, corrupted, conflicted, differentiated, possessive, competitive, the house divided fell.
We all think we are advancing, each division new and improved, taking credit for our complexity.
But the One who knows, knows we are simply metastasizing.
At the poles, a great atmospheric lens opens, and the radiation treatment begins.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
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Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: A Hole in the Ozone

Post by F5iver » Sun Sep 27, 2009 7:10 pm

strawman wrote:In the beginning, He was One.
And in His image, we were created, One.
He is still One.
But what happened to us? We divided, and then we multiplied.
One divided by one is one. One multiplied by one is one: Healthy, unitive, immortal.
But as soon as we divided in half, corrupted, conflicted, differentiated, possessive, competitive, the house divided fell.
We all think we are advancing, each division new and improved, taking credit for our complexity.
But the One who knows, knows we are simply metastasizing.
At the poles, a great atmospheric lens opens, and the radiation treatment begins.
Fan-frakkin-tastic.

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Re: A Hole in the Ozone

Post by ROU Killing Time » Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:33 am

Never looked at Monotheism in quite that fashion.
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Re: A Hole in the Ozone

Post by strawman » Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:54 am

Didn't consider the title much. Now I think better just call it: Remission
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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