Hell Hath No Fury

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Hell Hath No Fury

Post by m_a_kelly » Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:58 am

“Cheating bastard!” I fumed and waited for Donald to come home.

I found out about the affair six months ago and spent the last two preparing my goodbye. I waited calmly, just beyond the perimeter of my hastily scrawled handiwork. I heard the key turning in the lock.

Donald stepped inside and smiled at me. “Hi, honey! I’m home.”

His last words echoed shock and pain as he was suddenly consumed by the bright, hot flames which erupted and descended back into the pentagram scratched upon the floor where Donald had once stood.

“No,” I laughed madly. “Now you’re home.”
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders and says, "Oh, shit! She's awake!"

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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by strawman » Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:01 am

The hard part of a good fire is getting it going. After that, feeding the flames comes pretty easy.
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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by Mr. Tweedy » Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:58 pm

Ooo! Wicked! Excellent twist.
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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by ROU Killing Time » Sun Oct 25, 2009 12:14 am

So much new talent and spirit of creative competition lately.

Excellent Drabble, 8 tentacles + a squid beak surface-ward.
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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by m_a_kelly » Sun Oct 25, 2009 2:47 am

strawman wrote:The hard part of a good fire is getting it going. After that, feeding the flames comes pretty easy.
I don't believe in the old adage. I believe revenge is a dish best served hot. I think you were referring to vengeance, anyway.
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders and says, "Oh, shit! She's awake!"

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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by m_a_kelly » Sun Oct 25, 2009 2:53 am

Mr. Tweedy wrote:Ooo! Wicked! Excellent twist.
Thanks, Mr. Tweedy. I'm glad you liked it. Makes a newbie feel pretty darn good. :D
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Re: Hell Hath No Fury

Post by m_a_kelly » Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:02 am

ROU Killing Time wrote:So much new talent and spirit of creative competition lately.

Excellent Drabble, 8 tentacles + a squid beak surface-ward.
Thanks for the props, ROU. I like your drabbles (all I've read so far) so that means a lot to me. I'm new at Drabbles and don't mind saying they are harder than the stuff I normally write. Thanks for the "tenacles and beak up." I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Live your life in such a way that when your feet hit the floor in the morning, Satan shudders and says, "Oh, shit! She's awake!"

http://identifiedflyinglenticulars.blogspot.com/

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