CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS: (Twabble-Drabble)

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CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS: (Twabble-Drabble)

Post by TheJebi » Fri Dec 04, 2009 3:41 am

Bits of fragmented reality fractured and shattered angrily as I slammed the emergency stop button on my time-machine.

Wondering where I had materialized this time, I looked through the porthole and saw a foul scene. It seemed I was in hell.

A charred and desolate landscape reaching to the horizon was all that I could see, until the winged creatures appeared.

The Infernal Demons ascended to smite God. But found that no such creature existed, and so they too become nonexistent.

Then, realizing that I was this God who didn't exist, and briefly fathoming everything, I faded away into nothingness.
“I’m not TheJebi because I like the hum of a lightsaber in my hand… and I’m not TheJebi because I like being TheJebi. I’m TheJebi because the Galaxy needs me to be TheJebi.”

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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:01 am

Interesting. I think, therefore I am God, therefore *poof*? :)

This is why I don't do drugs (that you can prove, coppers).

Not bad.

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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by TheJebi » Fri Dec 04, 2009 4:12 am

Thanks ASID, glad you liked it.
But lets not forget to mention, for anybody who does not frequent the twit-fic arena,that
this, (like me first Drabble) IS A TWABBLE-DRABBLE! (each section is 100 characters)
And right now my brain hurts from hammering them into submission.
“I’m not TheJebi because I like the hum of a lightsaber in my hand… and I’m not TheJebi because I like being TheJebi. I’m TheJebi because the Galaxy needs me to be TheJebi.”

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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by Phenopath » Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:46 pm

I suspected that this as a TWABBLE-DWABBLE (try it with a lisp) from your layout, but you held it together despite the extra constraint. I liked the absurd final twabble.

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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by Phenopath » Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:55 pm

Nice title BTW
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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by ROU Killing Time » Fri Dec 04, 2009 9:58 pm

It's situations like this one that highlights just why it is so important to keep an extra packet of fuses in the glove-box.

Nice drabble and good job not letting the twadrabble form force contrivance.
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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS:

Post by TheJebi » Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:19 pm

Phenopath wrote:I suspected that this as a TWABBLE-DWABBLE (try it with a lisp) from your layout, but you held it together despite the extra constraint. I liked the absurd final twabble.

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Thanks lemon dude!
ROU Killing Time wrote:It's situations like this one that highlights just why it is so important to keep an extra packet of fuses in the glove-box.

Nice drabble and good job not letting the twadrabble form force contrivance.
And thank you as well ROU. It was not easy and my brain still hurts.
“I’m not TheJebi because I like the hum of a lightsaber in my hand… and I’m not TheJebi because I like being TheJebi. I’m TheJebi because the Galaxy needs me to be TheJebi.”

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Re: CURSE OF THE TIME BENDERS: (Twabble-Drabble)

Post by TheJebi » Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:09 am

Added "Twabble-Drabble" to title to avert any possible confusion.
“I’m not TheJebi because I like the hum of a lightsaber in my hand… and I’m not TheJebi because I like being TheJebi. I’m TheJebi because the Galaxy needs me to be TheJebi.”

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