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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2012 11:28 pm
by Grrlwriter
With all these great posts I've been inspired to write more - thanks, everyone!
The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:01 am
by Algernon Sydney is Dead
Grrlwriter wrote:The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
But the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2012 1:09 am
by Grrlwriter
But the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.
I tip my hat to you
Bravo!
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 2:32 am
by Grrlwriter
I'm blaming hanging out on this forum for the obscene amount of twitfic I'm writing. Obscene, I tell you! Shield your eyes!
Ding, dong the witch is dead! Which old witch? you asked. Hah. Now it’s your turn to die, munchkin, for killing my sister.
I Go All Out
Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2012 3:45 am
by loyaleagle
I go all out. I wear a mask and devil's horns. I drip fake blood over my clothes.
Tonight, no one can tell that I'm a monster.
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Halloween is a tough theme. It's like writing a "new" zombie story. So why not look inward for inspiration?
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:15 pm
by moman13
Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:32 pm
by Grrlwriter
moman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
Oooh, ooh, ooh, I want one!
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:32 pm
by loyaleagle
moman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
Clever
Welcome aboard!
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:18 am
by JMiriah
Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:45 pm
by Algernon Sydney is Dead
JMiriah wrote:Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.
Very nice!
Maybe should be:
, Pumpkin. (comma before Pumpkin) though?
Anyway, it's got it all: Squick, multiple entendres, a fresh (at least I hope it's fresh) perspective.
Welcome aboard, JMiriah!
(Sorry it took so long for the review queue to get cleared.)
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:52 pm
by JMiriah
Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.
Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!
Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:
Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 4:10 pm
by Grrlwriter
JMiriah wrote:Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.
Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!
Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:
Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
Yays, welcome to the forum! Love the zombie pumpkin pie - it certainly would save on all the baking I need to do this fall
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:51 pm
by Etaan
It took years to discover that ecstasy was the only cure. After that, however, the hospital wards were a sight to behold.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 6:13 am
by ROU Killing Time
There never was a morn the day before could not be recalled. He knew somehow, just the same, tomorrow would never arrive.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 6:46 am
by Grrlwriter
Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2012 3:12 pm
by strawman
Grrlwriter wrote:Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
I've got issues
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:52 am
by Grrlwriter
strawman wrote:
I've got issues
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?
Thanks to you I've had that song stuck in my head all day!
I've got nightmares
In dark pastures
I've got a chainsaw
Who could ask for anything more?
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 5:46 am
by Algernon Sydney is Dead
The heroine of the story, was a caretaker at a cemetery. The character was not well received but she kept the plot intact.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2012 12:01 pm
by strawman
Punctuation nazi took the day off.
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 12:56 am
by Algernon Sydney is Dead
I can be a lad no more, even though I wear your youthful skin. The pain is deep & my master calls. Perhaps another offering.