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tbaker2500 · Post by **tbaker2500** » Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:35 am

Last name of Doe?

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Mon Feb 17, 2014 1:36 pm

That's what the toe tag says, Detective Baker. Looks like he struck again.

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:43 pm

She took off her clothes, but she wasn’t naked underneath. She wore no skin. Just a heart, pumping, pumping, pumping…

Varda · Post by **Varda** » Mon Feb 17, 2014 6:15 pm

jeetkuneluke wrote:She took off her clothes, but she wasn’t naked underneath. She wore no skin. Just a heart, pumping, pumping, pumping…

Nice one, Jeetkuneluke! It appears to be two characters short of the required 100 though - I highly recommend this tool maintained by our most esteemed ASiD to reach twabble nirvana.

Might I suggest "ripped" instead of "took" to get you those two extra characters?

Welcome to the forums!

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Mon Feb 17, 2014 6:36 pm

Thanks Varda!

You're right, it is two characters short. It wasn't at first, but I tweaked something when posting (I don't remember what), and that killed it.

I like "ripped". Great suggestion!

tbaker2500 · Post by **tbaker2500** » Tue Feb 18, 2014 2:25 am

jeetkuneluke wrote:She took off her clothes, but she wasn’t naked underneath. She wore no skin. Just a heart, pumping, pumping, pumping…

That is the most touching twabble I have seen in a while. Nicely done!

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:39 pm

Thanks tbaker2500! It seemed appropriate for V-Day month.

Using Varda's suggestion to correct the character count, here's the revised version:

"She ripped off her clothes, but she wasn’t naked underneath. She wore no skin. Just a heart, pumping, pumping, pumping…"

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 4:17 am

As she unlocked the deadbolt and quickly turned the door knob, Jane said "Don't worry. It's probably just the mailman."

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 4:28 am

The scream faded into the thickening fog leaving Betty alone to wonder if it was the last sound humanity would ever hear.

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 2:58 pm

cranialwrench wrote:The scream faded into the thickening fog leaving Betty alone to wonder if it was the last sound humanity would ever hear.

I dig that! So many stories and worlds could be built around this one sentence.

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 3:05 pm

“I love you,” he said, as he drew the knife. She didn’t quake as he ran the blade across her throat. A perfect wedding gift.

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 7:23 pm

jeetkuneluke wrote:
cranialwrench wrote:The scream faded into the thickening fog leaving Betty alone to wonder if it was the last sound humanity would ever hear.
I dig that! So many stories and worlds could be built around this one sentence.

Thanks jeetkuneluke!

strawman · Post by **strawman** » Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:29 pm

Death of a Solipsist.

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Thu Feb 20, 2014 4:37 am

"Whoops." said Tesla after realizing the red wire was touching the negative terminal. Tunguska was going to be pissed.

Bejami · Post by **Bejami** » Thu Feb 20, 2014 5:14 am

The Universal Postal Union's leaders were quite surprised when checks for dues started coming in from the Crab Nebula.

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Fri Feb 21, 2014 3:57 am

The ash continued to rise, blocking out the sun. The cold that followed would chill bones. The cold would kill the world.

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Fri Feb 21, 2014 8:31 pm

Bejami wrote:The Universal Postal Union's leaders were quite surprised when checks for dues started coming in from the Crab Nebula.

Sounds like the beginning of a Douglas Adams tale. Love it.

jeetkuneluke · Post by **jeetkuneluke** » Fri Feb 21, 2014 11:22 pm

Tick.
Tock.
Tick.
Tock.
The thing in the clock waited.
Waited for midnight.
For the darkness.
To come out and play.
Tick.

tbaker2500 · Post by **tbaker2500** » Sat Feb 22, 2014 2:19 am

Nice!

cranialwrench · Post by **cranialwrench** » Sat Feb 22, 2014 4:32 am

The sun faded to just another speck of light and for the first time, I truly believed that I would never return home again.

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