Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
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With all these great posts I've been inspired to write more - thanks, everyone!
The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
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But the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.Grrlwriter wrote:The demon demanded his pound of flesh. With meticulous care he shaved muscle off my calves and forearms into a neat pile.
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I tip my hat to youBut the Brut(e) "after shave" was a particularly vicious touch.

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I'm blaming hanging out on this forum for the obscene amount of twitfic I'm writing. Obscene, I tell you! Shield your eyes!
Ding, dong the witch is dead! Which old witch? you asked. Hah. Now it’s your turn to die, munchkin, for killing my sister.
Ding, dong the witch is dead! Which old witch? you asked. Hah. Now it’s your turn to die, munchkin, for killing my sister.
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Halloween is a tough theme. It's like writing a "new" zombie story. So why not look inward for inspiration?
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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.
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Oooh, ooh, ooh, I want one!moman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.

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Clevermoman13 wrote:Max gaped at the real toys drawn with his Magic Marker. Grinning, he began to sketch Serenity from the poster on his wall.

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Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.
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Very nice!JMiriah wrote:Sensual, slippery, slick beneath my caress. I dip into your slimy goodness, lick sweet juice from my fingers. Pumpkin.

Maybe should be: , Pumpkin. (comma before Pumpkin) though?
Anyway, it's got it all: Squick, multiple entendres, a fresh (at least I hope it's fresh) perspective.
Welcome aboard, JMiriah!
(Sorry it took so long for the review queue to get cleared.)
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.
Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!
Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:
Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!
Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:
Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.
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Yays, welcome to the forum! Love the zombie pumpkin pie - it certainly would save on all the baking I need to do this fallJMiriah wrote:Thank you, Algernon! I have lurked from time to time, but grrlwriter inspired me to give writing a Twit a try.
Yup, I think you’re right about the comma. Thanks!
Fresh pumkin? Huh, that gives me an idea for another pumpkin-related Twit:
Mutilated flesh rots in the November sun. Zombie apocalypse survivors anticipate Thanksgiving pie transformation.

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
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Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
I've got issuesGrrlwriter wrote:Roses are red
violets are blue
you broke my heart
Now I’ll carve yours in two
Who needs a pumpkin, my dear
When I’ve got you?
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.
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Thanks to you I've had that song stuck in my head all day!strawman wrote: I've got issues
I've got moonshine
I've got scissors
Who could ask for anything more?

I've got nightmares
In dark pastures
I've got a chainsaw
Who could ask for anything more?
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The heroine of the story, was a caretaker at a cemetery. The character was not well received but she kept the plot intact.
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Punctuation nazi took the day off.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.
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I can be a lad no more, even though I wear your youthful skin. The pain is deep & my master calls. Perhaps another offering.