Nick and Penny

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Nick and Penny

Post by DoctorBanzai » Sun Mar 17, 2013 12:12 am

Nick pressed down hard on the gas pedal of his ’68 Charger and felt the surge of power as the monster engine came to life. The heavy car leapt forward, leaving twin trails of black painted onto the road behind him.

Next to him, Penny screeched in a mix of joy and fear. Nick knew that this would get her juices flowing, and he wanted to be there when she was ready, panting and screaming for more.

Soon, he thought.

Soon Penny would be screaming for more, as he thrust the knife deeply into her belly and twisted it around.

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Re: Nick and Penny

Post by strawman » Sun Mar 17, 2013 12:29 am

I think you may have mixed your metaphors there.

...or something.
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Re: Nick and Penny

Post by SeanT » Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:21 pm

Well it's a good twist, I thought they would crash or something, didn't see the knife coming, but it kinda doesn't fit. Still got my juices going though.
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