Dead on the Inside

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Dead on the Inside

Post by Scattercat » Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:53 am

"What of the living dead?" Markham sat back and sipped his glass of wine.

Rotheske did not move, save to follow Markham's hand. "The dead are just like the living. They can move about. They can speak as fluently as they like. They can eat and drink, if they wish. The sole difference is that they are dead; an internal and private affair."

Markham's lips twisted. "Then what separates us from them? You make it sound as though there's no telling!"

He paused, then, his gaze fixed on the buzzing fly that had just landed on Rotheske's unblinking eye.

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Re: Dead on the Inside

Post by munsi » Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:22 am

night of the urbane dead? i like it!

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Re: Dead on the Inside

Post by strawman » Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:31 pm

Clearly an example of evolution in progress, from zombo erectus to zombo sapiens.
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Re: Dead on the Inside

Post by Phenopath » Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:05 am

Very good, an original (and nasty) zombie story
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Re: Dead on the Inside

Post by JeffJ » Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:52 pm

I love it!
The visual won't get out of my head! :-D

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Re: Dead on the Inside

Post by JeffJ » Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:40 am

I still love this one!

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