She moved over him breathlessly, sensuously, thrusting steadily. Her writhing, rhythmic movement stiffened him in electric anticipation. Quivering with the building tension of animal desire, he lightly brushed her thigh with his mouth, teasing and tasting. He had never wanted anything more than this moment, her, now. When at last he came it was with one mighty thrust, sinking himself deep into her soft wet belly. She cried out once in a beautiful agony, her hands pounding his back, her body warm, weak, spent.
The great beast shook his head, swallowing in climax, and crashed back into the reddening sea.
It is bad enough to write a bad drabble, but to do it in such a shameless genre. I apologize in advance!
Rough Stuff--a shameless drabble
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Hee hee... Not in many places would this phrase be uttered.Mr. Tweedy wrote:It is squid sex, right?
Fun drabble, good job. Thanks for sharing it with us.
What about putting the word shark in the ending, or something a little more concrete that this isn't a sex story? That would make the humor hit harder, I think.
You're my quasi-ichthian angel, you're my half-amphibian queen...
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Funny how that is--you have an idea and the image is so strong in your mind as you write that you can't imagine someone else doesn't see it immediately.tbaker2500 wrote:What about putting the word shark in the ending, or something a little more concrete that this isn't a sex story? That would make the humor hit harder, I think.
The great shark (or great white) shook his head, swallowing in climax, and crashed back into the reddening sea.
It works as well or better. Thanks.